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Secret scripture by Lalin
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| ilalin |
Hi guys,
this is my newest production. The stream is 128kbps. Tempo 136bpm.
Secret scripture-Lalin
I appreciate all the comments and suggestions. Don't be shy.
Enjoy
Lalin
Lalin |
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| Jay M |
Some real nice ideas you have here, i really like it. Nice waves in the track, great job on that. I love it when the beat kicks back in all of a sudden, when you think it's away for a break :D
Though i think you should spend much more time on the synth, fx, kick and percussion, because each on its own is very flat and simple. I hear all the layers and the buildup make amends. Fix it and you'll have excellent stuff. |
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| ilalin |
Thanks Jay M. What do you mean by fixing the synths, percussion etc? Are you talking about additional layering or something else?
Thanks for the comments again. ;) |
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| EternalMusic |
Very nice fella :D, lovley break, nice synths, good structure overall. As Jay M said, you need to sharp the synths abit more, and work on the buildup abit more (extend it).
Nice work. |
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| Sunquest |
wow, very nice intro
really crystal clear quality sounds
nice synth coming in at 30 second :D
:eyes:
wow that synth at 2: something is amazing
its pure TIEsto old school
i looooove it
k now suggestions, in the beginniing add more pads/strings to make it fuller
and maybe make a longer climax in the middle
thats all i can suggest hehe
this is really good
i love it
check ur pm ;) |
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| ilalin |
| Thanks for your comments EternalMusic and Sunquest:) |
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