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Neotune - Fallen --- Full, 192 kbps download
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| Jay M |
Well, all the problems being fixed again... :D
Let me post my new track again, it was only just posted. Got some nice reactions to this one, and the peeps at the club tonight reacted positively. So here is:
Neotune - Fallen (Full Mix) <-- UPDATED. Right click, Save as...
Style: Trance (harder trance, for my doing :))
Time: 8:25
Bitrate: 192kbps
Tempo: 140 Bpm
Info: Yep, reached another level higher with this one.
Any comments on this one are much appreciated, as usual. Good or bad.
Thanks people!
-Jay
:p
Old version can be found here |
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| Mike_Foyle |
| very crisp, amazing production work. congratrs m8 uv made a master piece :P |
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| mef |
very cool.. love the progression into the bass change at bout 2.19
Nice work man!!! :D |
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| iLLicit |
Nice track Jay, you have already heard my comments! ;)
Keep up the nice work.
:D |
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| Mr.Mystery |
Uhh... cut the highs, especially on the percs, they hurt my ears. Otherwise you have some nice percs here.
Your bass also lacks in the low-end. You need a sub-bass.
I also feel you have some off notes in your synth that comes in at the 2-3 min mark. Or maybe it's just the weird progression it has, but it sounds weird to my ears...
Clipping/distortion at 3:43 when it breaks down.
Liking the lead even if it's a bit "ordinary". The buildup lacks tension. It just goes back in the tune without any kind of climax.
It's a pretty decent tune but I feel it's way too long, especially since the lead is quite simple and repetitive, I found myself skipping the last part altogether since it was just more of the same. |
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| broken silence |
Listening-
Not a fan of one of the percussions- It's a hit right in the begining thats direct-off beat
Nice hat- lots of high-end sounds electro-y :)
Bassline is great, but you need a punchier bassline in there too to provide more lowened. Just layer another one in there.
This track has a certain edge that I really like so far
The bassline change at like 2:15 is weak...maybe a bigger fill?
I really think this track is going somewhere...but it needs some major shortening. It gets kind of bland after a while--I think you could shorten this down to about 6 minutes and it would be killer still using the same elements you used.
Other than that, really enjoyable m8, me likey :) |
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| Jay M |
Well well, these are some constructive comments I can use! Thanks y'all!
Am gonna give the EQ another look for the bass and highs, and maybe i can create some more dynamics in the track and shorten it.
Cheers! |
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| Origin |
good work m8... percussions is great..but 2 damn long !!
some mastering would be nice ..
anyway nice work m8 keep it up !;) |
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| Jay M |
Hey origin, tnks for listening! At what points do you suggest better mastering...?
I'm working on the length of the song too. :D |
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| oDrori |
Starts off nice and dinamic, not really into that tom but it's alright...
00:56 I'd have the bass have a more dramatic entrance...
Sounds good though.
Breaks sounds pretty good but is kinda messy methinks.
Main lead is OK too.
Overall the tune sounds kinda thin on the lows a little, and is a bit too long IMO...
Good work. |
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| Sunquest |
:conf: i missed this one hehe
about that synth that starts at 2:11 minutes, its too reverby, too fruity loops, too cheesy :tongue2 id say change that synth but the melody of it is fine
really energetic
here comes the main melody, really good, pumping tune, sounds like a theme for some event like dance valley :D really
it would be an awsome theme song
overall i really like it, very pumping tune, gives me a good feel inside
peace out |
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| DRM |
I really like this tune. very energetic and driving, which is just my style. Production wise its on the whole very well done. my only gripes are the bass sounds a little too muddled or messy. and the intro melody synth that kicks in at 2:19 isnt to my tastes, think its because its all high end and no mid.
But congratz on a well produced track and if its ok with you i may well play this on ukta radio (if u dont know wot that is check the uk forum :) )
:D |
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