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Oded Drori - The Attic , Too Many Dreams [Full And @ 192 KBPS]
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| oDrori |
Hey there, wud love ya to give your comments on these 2 tracks...
Both are full and in 192 KBPS so you can hear all the bloopers ;)
Thanks!
The Attic
Too Many Dreams |
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| Jay M |
Too Many Dreams:
Kick feels like it overpowered a bit. Bass is penetrating, maybe it could use some fx too phatten it somewhat. The high percussionlike synth sort of thing is painful to my ears when it is cut away (too much res.?) Creates ticks around 3 mins. Nice synths come up in the break.. but when the kick comes in there nowhere all of a sudden. Compression problem?
Well these are some things i think you should work on. EQ-wise sounds ok, the synths used are nice. I like the clap. Overall not bad IMO, but sure needs more attention.
Cheerz
-Jay |
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| Massive84 |
hi am listening to Too many dreams
i like the dreamy riff, but the synth you using for it lacks for me.
intro is a bit repeatative
the break, i expect some dreamy pad , it's so empty, and it kinda change to a whole different song once the main lead comes in.
now technical things
your kick is good
your bassline is good bass it self needs to be louder
main lead is to soft, and needs serious eqing
your perc is ok
all i can think of right now |
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| oDrori |
| Aye, thanks U 2, all noticed & noted :) |
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| Sunquest |
alright, here it goes :D
The Attic isnt my type :rolleyes: , id say raise the kick volume a lot, just some equalizing there
as for too many dreams, i gotta say, uve improved on ur kick in that song :D
the bass is good, beats are good, the song is very relaxing really, its nice and slow
in the third quarter i dunno if that clap matches there, its like its going kick clap kick clap with no hi hats in between, maybe lower the clap volume
also im not sure
if some parts in the main middle melody match the rest of the song :conf: but i dunno maybe its fine
good work :D
peace out |
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