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| Jay M |
:conf:
Who are you? |
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| skies |
Im new to this site but not trance.
My name is Brian and I have been producing for a while.
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| skies |
Any feed back?
Please? |
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| Jay M |
| so, what's a while? |
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| skies |
since 2002.
Can I just get some feed back?:conf: |
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| Jay M |
| What software do you use? |
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| Sunquest |
LOL JayM stop torturing the guy :stongue:
alright skies, the song is a good start, i can see u just starting to produce or are at a few months? who knows, but its a good start if ur new....
the computery sound is too computery, no good :rolleyes:
but keep workin at it, ull get there :D
peace out |
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| Jay M |
Oww Sunquest just let me!
You know too that it's all about this.. I'm just making fun of the takers... :stongue:
:rolleyes: :rolleyes: |
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| Mr.Mystery |
| quote: | Originally posted by skies
since 2002.
Can I just get some feed back?:conf: |
You get what you give. |
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| eulerfx |
"Stylus" doesn't really change throughout the track. IMO add some scary industrial sfx and change it up a bit....have like a breakdown in the middle and add a deep bass line.
Like someone else said it sounds to computerish - cheesy. Also, if you're going for a non 4x4 beat in the track, might as well make it more interesting, or at least change it up a bit. I myself am not the master of a good beat, but I think I cant tell what sounds ok...
Otherwise it sounds pretty good, like its leading up to something nice and heavy. |
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| skies |
| Ya, I tried to add some techno elements in it to see what a mix of techno and trance might be. |
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