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Sunquest - Final Hope (pg. 2)
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| jcosgrove |
| quote: | Originally posted by Jay M
Agree with the above.
Work on the fine-tuning and finish this tune. 6-7-8 minutes long and give attention to every second. |
exactly..
especially work on intro and build up mate
i have big hopes for this one ;) |
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| Sunquest |
haha
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tnx for replies again
im half way done, and i will try my best ;)
PS: JayM i dunno how ur the only one who always notices these things hehe, either u have good hearing, or u got super good speakers, or are just smart, the delay thing, ur right its on delay a lot, but who cares if it sounds good ;) |
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| Ian Vanderson |
| :eyes: Wow :eyes: |
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| Ian Vanderson |
Ok, after I have heard it the 4th time, here my evaluation:
The guitar in the beginning is very, very nice, but that storminess sound somehow destroys the atmosphere. Perhaps you should try to find a more decent instrument for this at least for the first 30 seconds.
And in the last 20 seconds appears a melody, which I also don't like very much. This "ooooeeehhh-eeeeohhhh" sound. There's surely a better way to "outroduce" your track.
But 95% of what you have given us to hear, is really very amazing. Very strange, that you choose the same day for ya musical breakthrough as I do. :D |
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| Sunquest |
| quote: | Originally posted by Ian Vanderson
Ok, after I have heard it the 4th time, here my evaluation:
The guitar in the beginning is very, very nice, but that storminess sound somehow destroys the atmosphere. Perhaps you should try to find a more decent instrument for this at least for the first 30 seconds.
And in the last 20 seconds appears a melody, which I also don't like very much. This "ooooeeehhh-eeeeohhhh" sound. There's surely a better way to "outroduce" your track.
But 95% of what you have given us to hear, is really very amazing. Very strange, that you choose the same day for ya musical breakthrough as I do. :D |
haha
whats ur breakthrough track? :tongue2 |
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| Ian Vanderson |
It's called "Time". You will hear it soon in a Tiesto-Set :D ;)
I'll at least send it to him. It's not comparable to the other crap, I've posted here. We will see... :happy2: |
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| eulerfx |
Has a nice chill-laid back intro. Sounds really good. I like how the beat starts with the hit-hats and then goes into the breakdown. Everything seems really unified, like its part of one whole.
Do make the melody louder and more prominent, though that might take away from the whole unified thing.
Sounds pro.. |
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| seantyas |
have to say i love the song man... this is a peak song for a good trance set... be careful if u do raise that bass end tho, too much will mud your mix...
and as for the effects.. i think its just right, but thats me... this is trance... spaciousness is the name of the game :) |
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| BassAngel |
| quote: | Originally posted by jcosgrove
you really need to spend more time and effort working on 1 track, you have a track per day...i think you should fine tune something like this and you could make a really killer track... |
The man has a point Sunquest cos your stuff rox fella and it'd be a shame not to get some releases out of them. Agree deffo with Jay about the delay comment cos it's too much.
I personally would like to hear the bass tweaked as opposed to boosted cos it sounds nice to me where I'm sitting.
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| Sunquest |
thanx for replies again hehe :)
right now ive just finished the song, its about 9:something minutes and ill i gotta work on is the mastering, the hardest part :rolleyes:
i dont think i can ever master mastering but ill try, i fixed the delay ur talkin about, and the bass hopefully sounds better now and the kick is fixed as well,
thanx again for feedback, wish me luck! :p |
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| EternalMusic |
They're playing with your mind Ron i loved the delay :whip:
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| Teknikol |
nice work m8,
the guitar melody is superb, love it
main melody is pretty good too, it's nice how you let the guitar melody flow into the main synth melody!
keep it up! |
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