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Clear Sight - Sunshine
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| John |
hey all,
finally found some time to make music again. hope you like it:)
Clear Sight - Sunshine
feedback is much appreciated;)
john |
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| Vert |
Count me very very impressed. :D
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| Sunquest |
not bad ;)
the melody has lots of potential, u just need to work on some notes, and just a not on the bassline,
as for mastering, u have to fix up a lot of stuff, the kick is too quiet i think, the percs are fine, the bass has to be sharper and louder, the synths sound too reaon-ish / computerish, but its all definatly fixable :cool:
the structure is really good, pro stuff, just the mastering...
good work keep it up :D |
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| RaverBabySy |
| The kick is too quiet and I don't like the clap but otherwise this is a really nice track. It's got that typically chilled Ibiza feel, hence the title I imagine? Perhaps a little more variation would give it some legs though. Top job, keep it up. |
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| marco.V |
| yeah work on the drums & mastering. Otherwise its pretty good |
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| Thunder5 |
Pretty nice.
Gotta agree with others that the kick needs something. :) |
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| djrenco |
hey john,
I agree with sunquest; the synths sound too reaon-ish / computerish. nice guitar. good job, keep it up!
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| EternalMusic |
Ibiza! :D
Hi John,
This sounds like a Ibiza-kind of track. I like the main idea. I like the plucks/arps, and main synth is abit too hard but thats a taste issue. Some extra FX/perc would be great. The kicks needs to be to be more punchy. Thats all, gota love that melody :).
Cheers, good to see you back. |
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| Aerodrome |
| Pretty nice track. Good melodies, but i think you could work them out better. It's a bit basic, but absolutely not bad! |
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| Jay M |
Hey John,
Percussion is quite cool you got here!
Bassline is a bit too simple and too loud when it comes up first.
I like the synths in the first part. Don't like the clap tho.
The melody in the break isn't really my cup of tea i guess, the guitar doesn't take me along at all.
After that you got some nice things going on, synths and all, nice composition.
I'd check the levels once more if i were you. Some synths are a bit too loud, others too soft.
Nice happy feel overall, keep up! :D |
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| Massive84 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Jay M
Hey John,
Percussion is quite cool you got here!
Bassline is a bit too simple and too loud when it comes up first.
I like the synths in the first part. Don't like the clap tho.
The melody in the break isn't really my cup of tea i guess, the guitar doesn't take me along at all.
After that you got some nice things going on, synths and all, nice composition.
I'd check the levels once more if i were you. Some synths are a bit too loud, others too soft.
Nice happy feel overall, keep up! :D |
ya i agree with most of what you said
bass didn't really do it for me, perc fit very well.
melody is ok, liked it a bit. |
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| moolow |
Like the mainmelodies. Maybe the kick, as they say, is a bit to low. Even the guitar, which I think is really nice in this song! :gsmile:
Otherwise I think it's a great tune! |
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