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[Progressive Trance] Beach Tremors
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| Dmatrox |
Title:Shawn V - Beach Tremors
Style: Progressive/Trancey
Length: 10:57
Bitrate: 128 Stereo
Production: Fruity Loops 3.4 with V-Station VST, Z3TA+ VST, + various WAV samples
Post Production: Soundforge, T-racks
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Dont expect this track to be pro, im still new at this. Please let me know what you think :) |
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| BelgianGuru |
| It's not that bad, it's almost entirely mono though, maybe that's because of the way you compressed it dunno. That ticking thingy, like a metronome is working on my nerves after 10 minutes though :) It's a very thin song also. Try to fix that. And maybe ad some variation to it. |
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| Digital Aura |
1st... all clips are supposed to be at least 160kbps (as stated above)
OK-->oh no! not a whistle!! LOL Interesting percussion.. you a drummer? nice progression there with the perc loops. Crisp sounding.
Cant believe its fruity actually! Nice post prod work Matrox! The build at 4:30 is cool. This is progressive trance? I must be into more uplifting stuff...still waiting for a catchy melody...
any melody actually would be welcome. Maybe just me.;) Did you have vocals or acapella to this at one point? I would almost swear it.
That higher freq synth at about 6:30ish should maybe be developed into a better lead (or a melody even).
I was hoping for a buildup to something incredible but...
Great production values none-the-less, Matrox!
:D
edit: oh yeah do the right thing... listen to mine now and trash..er .. critique my work! |
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| Dmatrox |
OK, thanks for the feedback guys.
| quote: | | It's not that bad, it's almost entirely mono though, maybe that's because of the way you compressed it dunno. That ticking thingy, like a metronome is working on my nerves after 10 minutes though It's a very thin song also. Try to fix that. And maybe ad some variation to it. |
the ticking thing? :p i guess i gotta remove or change those hi hats.
Yeah i know its kinda thin. Im still struggling with that part. When i add more riffs i get melody clashes. So ill probably have to read up on some theory.
| quote: | OK-->oh no! not a whistle!! LOL Interesting percussion.. you a drummer? nice progression there with the perc loops. Crisp sounding.
Cant believe its fruity actually! Nice post prod work Matrox! The build at 4:30 is cool. This is progressive trance? I must be into more uplifting stuff...still waiting for a catchy melody...
any melody actually would be welcome. Maybe just me. Did you have vocals or acapella to this at one point? I would almost swear it.
That higher freq synth at about 6:30ish should maybe be developed into a better lead (or a melody even).
I was hoping for a buildup to something incredible but...
Great production values none-the-less, Matrox!
edit: oh yeah do the right thing... listen to mine now and trash..er .. critique my work! |
nah im not a drummer. Im trying to go for more between trance and progressive. I know what you mean by a catchy melody, i just suck at making them and making it in key with the rest. No i dont have any vocals or acapellas. Ill work on the build ups. And ill check out ur choon ;)
Thanks for the feedback :) |
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| Massive84 |
sup
mint percussion, quit relaxing sounds, but they are a bit weak, and ya i miss a climax thingi or something catchy.
and the most important thing i didn't hear..a bass?
also you mite wanne improve the kick, and unless you won't add anything new , i suggest make it a bit shorter..
thats all :) |
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| moore |
| The drum, percussion and the bass is very good produced. But the melody gets a bit boring imo. |
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| djmxmind |
| Cool perc. man. . . . |
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