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| kotus |
Here's my latest track. As usual, I welcome all feedback!
Kotus - Jrack |
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| Sunquest |
the kicks gotta be louder and u need more percs, the clap isnt that clear and the synths need a little work, just some mastering :S the piano that comes in is wayyyyyyy to distorted, put down the release on that, its hurting my ears lol
keep working on it, it has potential,
peace out |
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| djoxygen |
| There is something about this track. Its different but the intro sends me in a different world. Needs works but cool stuff none the less. |
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| EternalMusic |
| quote: | Originally posted by kotus
Here's my latest track. As usual, I welcome all feedback!
Kotus - Jrack |
As usual eh? Hi there! How are you? I see your new... Cool :), Welcome! Please read the stickys above. Thanks!
The track - It has some nice elements. Where is the bass though? I cant hear it. The guitar lead is ummm 1 - too loud 2 - wierd
but its a cool idea. I like it. The whole structure is abit strange, but oh well its a personal thingy!
p.s - The kick needs to be abit harder. |
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| Thunder5 |
Some nice ideas there sir.
But the kick is a bit dull.
Can't hear the bassline. Where is it? :D
Guitar lead is nice though at some parts it gets WEIRD, but thats just a personal taste.. |
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| readman |
A pretty weird track, but it has some potential.:) You really need to work on the lower region of your track. bassdrum to soft and some good basslines... And that guitarlead is way to loud
keep practicing
greetz,
3 Colours
(watch out for 3 Colours vs. Junktion - Spring of Day) |
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| kotus |
| Wow thanks all for the replies! I uploaded a revised version now which addresses some issues. Actually the guitar part I first turned down even before I came back and saw all the advice. :) Probably in my quest for less mud I eq'd out most of the bass :eyespop: Actually there is a droning 303 sub-bass that hangs out around 60hz which I was hoping would be enough but I guess not after all. That kick drum should be an easy adjustment too. Thanks again, I heart this forum :D |
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