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2nd Track. Feedback please!
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| conexion |
This is my 2nd track.
Thanx to those who commented on the first. Would appreciate feedback on this.
Awakening |
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| mr2gti |
| Not bad at squire, the snare drum doesn't go at all though, rest is nice though |
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| conexion |
| Thanxs mr2gti, can you elaborate on what is wrong with the snare. Its one area I always seem to fall down on. |
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| DylanSwe |
Good one!
Nice start to the song. Bass sounds very nice, flows very well.
The pads starts hard and fades out very quickly, dont know if this is intentional but it sounds strange. Perhaps try to increase the attack time, have more delay and release?
The lead synth has a good melody, but could be more stronger, stand out more in the track. The bassline is stealing some of the thunder.
Im not good at beats myself, but the snare sounds abit hollow, to much alike the bassdrum? I have troubles myself with beats so Im not sure what to tell you.
But in generealy the beat needs to be punched up, it sounds weak, dont know if you´ve added reverb or chorus to the snares and perc?
I've been told to do this, but im still having problems with creating pro-sounding beats. "Meet Beat, The Bitch" ;) |
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| BuRoLovesTrance |
| I have listened to your track and all I can say is that you need to work on it.... ;) |
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| conexion |
Thanx to those who have given me feedback.
To anyone who is interested i have remixed the track and reposted it. I have retuned the snare sample and added some compression to it, I think this makes it sit better in the mix (it comes in at 1:50).
I have also brought up the melody in the mix so that it doesnt fight with the bass so much in the second half.
Awakening
Thanx again. |
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