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| madj0ben |
hey guys.. check it out..
it's kinda short.. only 4:24.. 128kbps..
here's the link:
mp3 link
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| DylanSwe |
This is good. like the melodies and the sounds used.
The climax is good, the piano works well over the synth.
but the base that comes in at 1.48 sounds strange..doesnt fit well at all. hmm...cant tell if itīs the same acid line that starts the song...but im guessing it is.
Dont like the bassdrum-rolls, they come in to abruptly, perhaps try to introduce the rolls a few beats sooner, with a longer buildup until the maximized peak: normal-fast-faster-fastest.
AGain, like the melodies and arrangment. Good work! |
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| madj0ben |
thanx DylanSwe for the comment.. :)
im working on the bassline.. it's not that good..
and also.. ill try to apply your suggestion on the bd-rolls..
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| Subtle |
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the melody synh that comes is ok
Piano is good
minus
some sounds too weird
sounds a little weird
there is something about the bass
needs more percussion
there is too little happening
conclusion
this needs more work, more synths, more percussion.. the Piano is good though
*keep on producing* ;) |
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| DjSimonB |
| It's a nice track... major key? Nice and uplifting anyway, I gotta say I liked it. The intro sounded a bit dodgy to me, but other than that I quite liked it :) |
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| madj0ben |
thanx DjSimonB... im working on the bassline right now.. any suggestions?
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| kotus |
| At the 1:38 bassline part...instead of the notes you are using now, use Bb for the first 2 chords on the pad then for the last chord use Eb. Hey it could sound better you never know ;) |
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| madj0ben |
| hey.. thanx.. hehehe.. ill try that.. ;) |
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| Focean |
hey...nice production..
dun like the bass...
keep on produicin' ;) |
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| Vizay |
first of all, skip the 303ish bassound, doesn't fit very well with the other parts of the track :/
also make shure to check so all sounds are in the same key, feels like the bass lies in a diferent key
work more on the beat, it's a good and solid start you have for the beat but it needs to be extended, it's a bit to static through the whole track
and as a last comment remember that just because a synth sounds cool doesn't mean that it will fit with the rest of the track, the mainlead in the end would work fine for a massive hardtrancer but it doesn't fit with the rest of the sounds in the track
just remember, keep up the work and have fun! :) |
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