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DJ B8 - Daybreak
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| DJ B8 |
Hi This is a new tune ive been working on for a while now. Its not completely finished, and I think theres still quite a lot of work to be done, but the ideas there!
Anyway, click here to listen and tell me what you think. I'd be very greatful for suggestions, critcisms etc.
Cheers |
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| Subtle |
plus
nice synths
I like the melody
nice basic rhythm
I like the break
minus
synth comes too fast
this sounds alot like DJ Jan - X-Santo
sounds are a little messed up
conclusion
I really like the idea of this tune, I love the melody, totally my style, u need to work more on the arrangement.. it needs more build up.. and the synths I think need too be softened a bit.. I really would like to hear the tune when it is finished.. and I love the chord progression it is not as cheesy as I am used to hear other amateur producers do... GREAT!
8+/10
PS: If u do want me to remix this tune, PM me, cause I would love too ;) |
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| Spin Doctor |
| Overall, quite tasty. The lead is a bit overpowering though, tends to fight ever so slightly with the background synth line. The breakbeat in the breakdown is a nice touch, but it’s hard to make out. The arrangement deffo needs working on, but I’m guessing this is an edited down version for us to listen to. ;) |
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| EternalMusic |
| Very nice. You should bring the break beat more front. Nice pads, and very atmospheric. And yes, the lead is overpowering. There is no proper buildup + its too short. But nice ideas, i liked it. Keep working on it. |
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| DJ B8 |
| Thanks for the help! I'll post it again when ive sorted out the arrangement:D |
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