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NEW TRACK: Subtle pres. Project Seven - Digital Wonders (Part I)
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| Subtle |
hi I recently finished a new track of my own in a long time..
style: trance
length: 8:13
BPM: 140
quality: 128 kbps
Project Seven - Digital Wonders (Part I) (right click download)
I was hoping to get some feedback on this one.. :) |
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| Tomas_P |
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| Subtle |
thanks for pointing that out, :)
I changed the track name, well it is there now, if anybody would care to take a listen ;), it has a rather hard bassline.. I am very satisfied with it, cause it has some dark progressive touch.. |
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| Tomas_P |
Well i'll try to give you my honest oppinion :)
For starters i don't like the basskick it's like it's like somebody's banging their head agains a barrel :D
The Bassline is good. Before the drop i pretty much like besides the bongo drums , sounds too repeative and let's the track down a bit. I like the breakdown and i really like the main lead. A good track (besides the bongos, the bongos made me crazy) keep up the good work :) |
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| Subtle |
| quote: | Originally posted by Tomas_P
Well i'll try to give you my honest oppinion :)
For starters i don't like the basskick it's like it's like somebody's banging their head agains a barrel :D
The Bassline is good. Before the drop i pretty much like besides the bongo drums , sounds too repeative and let's the track down a bit. I like the breakdown and i really like the main lead. A good track (besides the bongos, the bongos made me crazy) keep up the good work :) |
thanx for listening mate, the kickdrum is the "Bren F" kick through Scream distortion in Reason.. u don`t like the bongo drums =( .. I see,they are maybe a little Sahara`ish.. thanks for pointing that out :) |
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| Jay M |
Yikes! Kickdrum is a naughty one, don't like. Fortunately the massive bass takes over more of the attention. The lead coming then at 2:03 could use more high-end, it's hidden behind the bassline. Sahara bongo's are ok, just a bit too loud. Sounding big, not bad at that point. I'd check some levels and use a more clear and beautiful kick.. seems to clip because of that kick.
Melody is a bit too simple. Oh, sudden change here at 4:34.. don't like that one, you'd better keep it simple, because it sound ugly when it falls back, IMO.
Ok overall it's not bad, I'd suggest to bring a bit more variety in the percussions, and keep the melody simple (or a new one ;) ). And find a better kick.. and keep us updated! :D
Peace
-Jay |
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| madj0ben |
the kick is not that good.. i didnt like it... and bongos is ok..
i like the main lead.. this is a good track... just change the kick.. ;)
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| EternalMusic |
Hi there!
You need to change the kick fast :p. Anyway, Some of the melodys are out of sync - thats the most annoying thing about the track. The bongo aint bad, its just too simple i guess. You need to work on the transitions as well, the one at 7:19 is the worst one i think. The track needs some work on the musical part as i said before. Work on that before everything else ;).
Cheers, keep working. |
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| Subtle |
| quote: | | Originally posted by EternalMusic Some of the melodys are out of sync - thats the most annoying thing about the track |
what do u mean by that really? ;) thanks for listening |
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