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Kotus - Witness the Saucer
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| kotus |
Here's my latest track. Comments welcome of course.
Witness the Saucer
5:12
192kbps/vbr
link to the file |
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| kotus |
| Sorry for bumping but I really would like at least one comment. It's just a small thing but it really helps. |
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| DJ_Silverstone1 |
| downloading now :D |
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| shockwavedj |
yeah, man, I'm also waiting for at least one comment to my last track (here) and thinkin to bump it up too... :rolleyes: anyway I'll put the first stone down.
From an artistic angle: I think you should better define the "leit motiv" of your composition. IMO sometimes it's a bit harmonically confusing... but that's only my opinion.
From a technical angle: the rhythm seems to be "very heavy"... but I'm not the best to talk about uplifting rhythms. You should also spread over the stereo the ritmic elements: claps, ohh,... not only the synths. And make more rhythm variations. And try to keep clean the mids, so I think they are a bit muddy.
Otherwise I like listening to other kinds of trance. ;) |
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| DJ_Silverstone1 |
i like its hard edge sorta airwave progressive style.
i like the melody.
its very complicated and weird. but i do like it!!!!
yea the mid does need to be tweaked
otherwise its pretty good and the main thing is it is actually very different.
i can see this growing on me weirdly. |
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| kotus |
| Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it! :) |
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| Digital Aura |
yo Kot!
love the heavy beat...lovely synths you've chosen. TASTY. Dont think the mids are muddy...its just the choice of patches probably.
Lead synth sounds a tad de-tuned ... a little flat I'd say.
Especially at 2:00 - 2:20...
I love the name of your track! Wish I could think of great names like this... I envision a UFO in this tune! Ending needs some work.
Personally, I like more melodious stuff...but this has great production value and you've put some cool things into this.
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| eulerfx |
| I really like the structure of the song. The harmonics are not outstanding and like others said the sounds themselves need work. But other than that, the arranging is good. |
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