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Advice on my half finished track: DNA - M (Mescaline)
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| PerfectCircle |
Hows it going everyone?!
I've been putting a lot of hours and attention to detail in this track and I would call it 3/4 complete musically but 1/2 complete to a good end product.
I'm not even going to try and give it trance genre because I think its got hints of psy, acid and dark. But its definately hard, thats for sure.
The climax that comes in at about 2:45, I'm not sure if I should keep all the parts where the beat comes out to come in with a more hectic melody...(e.g. 3:16)
Also instead of fading out at the end I think I'll bring back the first theme somehow, not sure how yet. Probably faid the main synth back in and break to it.
Anyway, heres the link (4mins 128bit mp3, roughly 5mb):
DNA - M (Mescaline) |
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| PerfectCircle |
| * I don't mean to be annoying bumping this but its had 16 viewings and not one reply* |
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| eulerfx |
I like those "mean" sounds around 0:40. The percussion/drum in the intro is nice too.
I think you need a better flow during the main parts, they seem to sound like preludes to something.
Other then that, I can't add anything.. |
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