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Open-mind - Synthétic melody [Trance] (pg. 2)
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| Jay M |
Hey
The classical-like start work out pretty good, but it's a bit too long IMO. Overall mix sounds a bit muddy, not too well sorted that out. The bass you got coming is a bit too dry and simple, would 've expected a more rolling phat one. The coming synthlead is a muddy one and a bit too flat as well, i think if u cut off a bit more low and detune it some more it would sound better. Melody is ok, but not special enough to really stand out, but that might be because of the synth which is a bit too weak IMO. That FX sound is ok on it's own, but it's used a bit too often, maybe play around with other fx? Percs are ok. That clap has an ugly delayed tail, might be personal but I'd remove the delay in on the reverb.
Keep up!
Cheers
-Jay |
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| Dj Tilo |
just listening to the massive intro...omg :eyespop:
love this track...me wants on vinyl!!! |
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| Trancevision |
very good work. Always liked your tunes, very pro...
Trancevision |
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| conexion |
Sorry, but to my mind it just sounds a bit flat, as though its missing something. Maybe its the synths or it needs more in it. Sorry I just cant put my finger on whats missing!
The string build up is nice though. |
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| ilalin |
good song, but I expected more development on the main melody. Starts out massive but does not deliver later...
Overall, good production. Keep it up:) |
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| open-mind |
I'm glad to see that there is differents opinions for this track.
proof that there is "something" in this one.
Here is my answer:
The start is effectivly a bit too long.
The bass is "basic" cause i made it more "armin style" for my last track, and i wanted to change.
I like the Push style handclap, i don't want to change it.
And some guys says the synth is weak; well, it's a supersaw synth, powerfull - i think, i don't know they are saying by "weak". (i don't know the exact traduction for this word in french...).
Overall, thanks for the compliments in general..
ps: Maybe i will make a remix for this tune one day... |
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| open-mind |
| more comments!!:D :D |
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| Derosas |
:eyes: J'adore la combinaison de la musique classique et la transe.
No advice, sorry. Sounds complete to me. |
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| alexpea |
| those chord-progressions are totally mindblowing!!! How did you come up with such a string-composition :wtf: I think the bass is totally crap. It ruins the song. The bass sounds so...near, if you know what I mean. Sort of dry... Hmm... The melody isn't all that... But I hear you're trying to follow the strings and make the melody fit with them... I think you've just used the exact same notes in your melody as in your strings. Jeje... I liked the start. That's all. This tune would be perfect for remixing!!! :toothless |
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| The Drow |
Mixing is not good.
The supersaw is too strong and the strings are low.
The bass could be a lil more bumpy with a reverb.
The drums are good but the open hihat is to sharp.
And check your pm's :D.
The strings are very good:eyespop: :eyes:.
They are very good and classic music style.
Kinda Adiago for Strings track.
Nice one 7/10.
p.s.
As the rain begains to fall was wayyyyyy better. |
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| Sebraa |
KIPPENVELMETER very high right now! you make my friday morning so good. CINEMATIC TRANCE on the way :) GOOOOOOOOOD -> GOD!
Youre on the top of the TA producers right now ;) NICE!
Can I recommend you to EE local DJ's and our support is 100%!
Maybe more KICKdrum and basslines-> only critic about production
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Sebraa
Better then SENSATION 2003 anthem , only thing is you produced whole track and RANK1 used MOZARD :D |
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| fake_illusion |
The beat is a bit simple... you may raise the volume of the hand clap in that part a bit (6:23-7:16)\
An extra pad may be added as well. It sounds a bit empty to me.
For the rest it's more than ok! |
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