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| conexion |
My third track remixed after a previous submission taking on board comments by those who responded.
Worked on the percussion, kick, snare, claps. Tried to phatten up the synth sounds. Basically a lot more production!!!!
Feedback again would be appreciated.
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| conexion |
Sorry converted the wrong file. Too much work, too much production, not enough sleep - you know how it goes :eyes:
same link as above |
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| DJ_TonKs |
| the diffeent sounds of synth ae good .. but you need to work the drums. |
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| conexion |
| thanks DJ_Tonks. But could anyone be more specific as to what is wrong with the drums i.e. the patterns, the mix, the eq, the sounds any feedback much appreciated. |
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| Romain |
ah hmm i should not be gentle with english people today but well...
good track, uplifting, your synths and fx are very good. Technically it sounds good... but musically it can be improved
bassline can be improved, make it more powerful... so we can hear the changes... chords progression might be improved too.
with a little more work it could sound awesome i think. |
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| EternalMusic |
Hi,
The intro is abit harsh. Nice synths and elements. The kick is too weak. The clap is dry. Overall its good :D, nice use of FX as well but its abit repetive. |
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| conexion |
Thanks Romain but, I'm not a supporter of football so in this case i wish your side well!!
I put the track up late last night and my eq was a little out. Have just put it up for the third time. I think you'll find the bass a little more prominent and the drums have all been eq'd again. |
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| Massive84 |
| quote: | Originally posted by EternalMusic
Hi,
The intro is abit harsh. Nice synths and elements. The kick is too weak. The clap is dry. Overall its good :D, nice use of FX as well but its abit repetive. |
i agree with this, also the bass is rather weak.
but everything has been mentioned, some synths were to high pitched for my taste. |
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| conexion |
Thanx for all your feedback.
I've taken on board all of your comments and i am in the process of reworking certain parts! |
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| M1cro5lave |
Yup, kicks are too weak. Bassline is too simple, use several 'layers' and different freq to get a more massive bassline.
Hats could be lowered a bit in frequence, imo they stick out too much and disturbs the nice melody you have. Which is very nice :D
Maybe try make the melody a bit more smooth and nice to your ears if you see what I mean.
A little bit of mastering and it could be a great track. Keep up the good work! :D |
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