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beautiful sorrow
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| danielrong |
hey id like some feedback on what ive done so far on this track. its not quite finished yet..needs some fine tuning.
All feedback appreciated and valuable.
Length: 9:01
Size: 10.5mb
Style: chill trance
Tempo: 131
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please download from the link in the next post |
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| somnium |
no, it wasn't that bad :p
you may not get reviews cause it's such a large file, and it transfers from that server so slowly.
this is really a pretty cool track i think...though it sounds like some of your effects are too loud...that effect you start to fade in around 0:30 that goes for a while...way too loud, crowding things up...sounds kinda distorted.
i dig the strings...what'd you use for 'em? breakbeat's cool too.
and again around 5:20 with the stuff being too loud...sounds distorted again...not fun to listen to. i'd fix that...that goes on for a while...pretty distracting.
if you fixed some stuff, this'd be a pretty cool track. :D
keep it up |
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| danielrong |
hey thanks for commenting
the strings are from the reason orkester soundbanks(violins, cellos and a bass).
as for the huge distorted pad thingy..i kinda like it, maybe it sounds different on your system or something. ive only played it on one set of speakers..
anyway, ill see what i can do about it.
cheers |
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| Sunquest |
wow
the bass/beats/synth is indredible
i love distorted things like this
its very energetic in a club, but people dont realize that ;)
this track sounds like above and beyond - no one on earth style
just the beats/bass
the breakbeat is ok, very light and simple but it fits the song
overall i love this song, really excellent, energetic/relaxing melodic trance tune,
for the people: this is worth downloading
im definatly keeping this
one suggestion: make vocals like motorcycle :D , itll fit amazing :D
amazing tune,
peace out
PS: thanx for the full :D , gonna play this one a lot
EDIT: whats the artist name i can put it under? :D give me the full track name |
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| danielrong |
Sunqest:
Im really glad you like it, and im glad im not the only one who likes the distorted pad. Ur right, it sounds great in the club (and on my headphones too for that matter.)
Heh yea, i was thinking about doing a vocal version, but idunno who would sing.
The full track name is:
Daniel Rong - Beautiful Sorrow(Original mix)
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oh btw..took a listen to ur tracks, some quality stuff there..keep it up.:) |
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| Sunquest |
thanx :D
make more tracks, share with us yes muahaha
and send the track to gabriel and dresden, who knows :D |
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| danielrong |
| quote: | Originally posted by Sunquest
thanx :D
make more tracks, share with us yes muahaha
and send the track to gabriel and dresden, who knows :D |
hehe..meh, dont think it sounds professional enough for that |
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| alzalam |
did i mention this track was "teh omg!!1"
download it NOW, it is worth it x10 to the 23rd!! |
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