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Antonio Gomez - Summer Call (Original Mix) (pg. 2)
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| Fractal |
Hey,your tune is nice! BUT,I think you could improuve some parts aswell.
First of all,you should work on mixing and mastering. Don't forget to equalize your channels. Try making your instruments more distinctive (hope you understand what I mean). For example your bassline is a bit...flat. When I compare your tune with some pro stuff I hear the difference very clearly. Same for some other instruments. I think equaizing or compressing could help a lot!;)
About your mainlead... I liked it !:) Reminds me a bit of Jurgen Vries. Not sure about the melody,just not my style but still OK.
Anyway,very good effort mate. Keep it up! |
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| sleep |
| Interesting, the eq's are the last thing I would touch on this clean piece. It feels good when you play with my stereo-capable headphones. It is also clear that your electronic music production ability has reached the level at which critique begins to encroach on personal stylistic goals, so I will not critique. Nice clean production. |
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| Massive84 |
| OK the bass is just to loud, after hearing it 100000 times. i finallly concluded that the bass is just to loud. |
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| Spad |
Really good work. The intro and build are quality. The bassline...doesn't sound too loud to me but I've got crap speakers, loud basslines are better for me coz you can actually hear them :D The kick is top notch!
The melody's not my thing, but that's more a matter of taste than a complaint..the melody's definetly right for the tune....I hope that makes sense.
Nice one |
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| Thunder5 |
Hmm.. just realised that I had dled this "ages" ago. :)
Yeah.. the bassline is a bit too loud. Otherwise a great track..
Though the open hihat you used is so so used, common and often heard. but that is just a minor detail.:D |
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| Jay M |
Good work on this one! Some sounds are indeed a little bit too flat. I like the ambients, as always in your tracks! A bit muddy, but that's just a matter of practise and time. Same with my tracks.
But you're surely improving, keep them coming!!
Greetz
-Jay |
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| Shad0wmaster |
| Great work! Keep em coming :D |
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| .A.Y. |
kick is nice
hihats not very good
the string is also nice
claps are good
and those melos in the backgrounds are great
bassline is awesome!
very powerfull
you should switch the hihats are give them a little eq
cauze they dont sounds very professional
im in 1:45 and till now the track sounds really great
k now some melody came
and she is nice
bass notes has change
sounds great!
string is nice+
but sounds alittle dry i think..
melody came
great sound!
very good melody..
awesome :eyespop:
really awesome track
good work mate! |
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| EternalMusic |
Thanks guys!
I've improved some things, mainly sound issuses, i'll post later :D.
Thanks again for the comments. |
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| Matt |
| quote: | Originally posted by EternalMusic
Thanks guys!
I've improved some things, mainly sound issuses, i'll post later :D.
Thanks again for the comments. |
awesome tune man!
drop me a pm when the updated version is up.
I am mixing my demo for the World Electronic Music Festival tomorrow, and I wanna use this track! |
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| Gladius |
| man, I just need to reply on this one, what a great tune!! that melody is so awesome!! |
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