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Dave Joy - First Impression (cooper Remix)
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| Sunquest |
| link doesnt work :( |
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| DJ-Igloo |
| eh ill upload it to a mirror site of my friends just a sec |
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| DjCommisad |
seems too simple
dunno how to explain
first 2 mins is almost technoish, but simple, (note im a trance/progressive person so techno is not my forte)
the best part of the track is when the melody first comes in
around 2:10 or something
the breakdown is pretty good.. i like that little thing u do at the end of the breakdown
but the silence at the end of the buildup before the track comes back just doesn't feel right, and the power of the track after such a powerful buildup seems a bit flat
the bass is too simple and repeatative, the melody isn't there.. but if its techno, maybe that's a good thing.
not sure really. try to get some techno listeners to give u some feedback. |
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| Sunquest |
no offence, but it sounds a little like euro dance hehe
mainly because of the bass, its just a simple bom bom bom bass, no pattern really
but i geuss ull fix it up through out ur producing experience since u seem like ur starting ;)
nice track though
i dunno what to suggest hehe
good stuff, keep workin at it
l8s |
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