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Blank & Jones - Flowtation (Neotune Remix) - Full, 192 kbps download
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| Jay M |
Hi guys,
Have been working on this remix lately. Was supposed to send it in for the Blank & Jones Remix competition, but I couldn't finish it in time. Maybe I have to give the EQ another look, but the melody is coming out of my nose now.. so maybe another time. Already satisfied with the result, hope you like it too. :D
Blank & Jones - Flowtation (Neotune Remix) <-- Right Click, Save As..
Trance | 9:03 | 144 BPM | 192 kbps
Comments most welcome, thanks!
-Jay :thepirate |
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| Sunquest |
hey m8
i love the pads, the piano, really awsome :D
the kick isnt right though, i dunno how to explain, maybe it just needs to be stronger, like yours is going bom bom bom
it should go boom boom boom, the kick should be longer i geuss, also clap is too quiet maybe because the main melody at around 4 minutes or so is loud so its covering that...
other than that its perfect :D
definatly keeping this one ;)
thanx for the share
peace out |
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| Jay M |
Thnks man for listening. I'll keep it in mind when I have another look at it. Made the kick myself, so I need to improve that! :D
Cheers! |
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| Sunquest |
thats what i heard
u always make ur own stuff ;)
i give u respect for that
other than that, u suck :stongue: :stongue:
j/k :D |
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| Shad0wmaster |
This could be HUGE! Love, love, love, LOVE the piano :D
My suggestions are to make the kick more powerful and to add more highs, percs etc. |
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| Jay M |
Thanks Shadow. I think the percs are at the back a bit because of the lead synth..
Cheers |
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| GaryLogan |
| i LOVE this track immensely!!!Gonna play this on Friday for the 2nd Birthday show for sure!!!!!I cant hear any problems with it myself and the piano is beautiful!!MORE!:D :eyes: |
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| .A.Y. |
the beat is great
the hihats are too sharp i think
make them a little softer
awesome sounds at the start
love those melos
bass is also awesome
the kick is good but a you should make him fatter
didnt like clap.. too sharp.. you should give the claps more power and make them fatter
piano is nice... dont like his sounds..
string is great
the break is too long
k the melody is coming
dont like this sounds
not sounds very professional..
and also her notes are kinda simple.. you know.. nothing special
overall its a great track but you could make him alot more better |
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| EternalMusic |
Well mate i must say im impressed! Overall im digging it and i love it.
The kick is rather weak or something like ron said. The break could use a sub string or so, because its abit thin. The lead is nice but seems like it lacks resonance, did you over filter it maybe? FX is ing quality :D. Ummm some transitions needs to be softer. Like the one after the leads fades, the problem is that it just dissapears.
Good job, liked that piano and pad sound.
Roger out. |
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| Jay M |
Thanks a lot guys for reviewing and comments, they help me a lot getting rid of the bugs in music.
Keep m coming :D
Cheers
-Jay |
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| Massive84 |
jay..remove the blank and crap melody, and make your own 1, and make a new pads maybe?
call it an orignal, coz the beat is great.
also ya your perc are sharp, but i tend to hear that alot in FL productions.. |
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| Jay M |
LOL tnks Massive.
Yeh i don't really get "smooth" sound over my percs, they are pretty sharp and crisp instead. What can I do...... (except for cutting the highs, but that's almost equal to lowering volume of percs..) |
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