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Matti Leppanen Pres Lost Citizen - Diane <192k>
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| Thunder5 |
Here I am. Back with boring melodies and dull synths. :toothless
Done with FL and Pro-53 + V-station..
Lenght: 7:04
Size: 9.71MB
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EDIT: Made a few cuts and such... :) It is somewhat shorter now.. |
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| Trancevision |
really a bit boring. Track is much too long I think, try to make a 5 minute cut and use more and better percussion sounds. The whole track could be best found on a Gigi D' Agostini Album, but certainly not in an uplifting trance set.
Trancevision |
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| EternalMusic |
Man first of all make some cuts :D, its too long indeed. Anyway, you got really some nice ideas. I actually liked the melodys, they are different and somehow chilly. The kick is weak, rise its volume abit more. You need to use more effects on the instruments + EQ the channels. The whole track lacks Reverb, delay, etc and some extra perc. Specialy that piano. Nice pads btw ;).
Keep working mate, your on the right road.
peace. |
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| Massive84 |
agree with EM and its way to long unless you are willing to add more stuff to variate..
cut it make it around 6-7 mins. |
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| Thunder5 |
Thanks for the comments.. appreciate them.
You are right. It is way too long. :)
I'll have a look if there is something to cut away.. :D |
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| AlphaStarred |
not too shabby m8 :)
needs a little more drive imo and perhaps some more drums or whatnot but it's a good attempt. As they say, practice makes perfect. (but nobody's perfect so why practice? :D j/k).
good luck in the future!
cheers |
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