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Renco Steenbergen - Sunday Morning
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| djrenco |
hey people,
here is the full version of my first progressive track. download it here
bitrate: 192kbps
time: 2:37
feedback is welcome!
Renco |
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| Jay M |
Hey Renco,
Nice relaxing proggy tune you have here! I love these sounds with extra delay on them, nice work. Bass is a bit too loud maybe, my walls are shaking hehe. I'd fill it up a bit with some atmospheric fx sounds, and maybe some percussion (hihat) with delay. Just spitting ideas.
Nice work!
-Jay |
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| djrenco |
thanks for your reply Jay M! glad you like it:) I will try to put some 'good' fx sounds in it.
Renco |
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| Bren-F |
I like this, has a great atmosphere.
As Jay M has said I would put some more fx in there.
Also that melody that comes in on 2.09, the notes hit to short, try adding more reverb and give the sample a longer release on the ADSR Envelope.
Other then that its a superb track so far. Can't wait to hear the finished version :) |
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| Mike_Foyle |
| well this is very nice :) i like it. relaxing, and very unique. keep it up :) |
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| Mike_Foyle |
| altho one thing i dont like is the way that percussiony effect sounds so distorted, its nice to a certain extent, but theres quite a nasty mid frequency in there which is quite piercing, it mite just be my headphones, the ones im using are pants :P i like it lots tho, any chance of a full copy? i understand if thats not posible :) keep it up |
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| Derosas |
| Deffinetly add some delay to fill it up. I like most of it, it just seems plain and bare without the effects. Add some and you will have a killer tune. |
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| Creamfields23 |
Nice job man. Really like this one.
Great melodie work on this one it has potential  |
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| djrenco |
thanks for the comments guys!!:D I'm glad you like it! I hope I can finish my track soon.
anyone else have comments? |
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| marcooz |
good job Renco mate ;) nice, original track only add some FX (as other said) and work with mastering...
cheers |
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| Thom Sawy |
Nice one... would like to hear the full version to give propper feed though , Keep it up bro.
Cheers |
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| Sebraa |
Nice chill track!
Sound that starts 01:25 sounds little out of harmony. Everything else perfect. 02:09 sound need more effects or ADSR like Bren-F says!
Keep it up!
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Sebraa |
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