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new melodic track, Derosas-Canyon
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| Derosas |
So finally I produce something that I am somewhat satisfied with. Sorry for the HUGE size, 11.7mbs. It's progess from my last few tracks, so I'm pumped. All comments are greatly appreciated :D
Derosas-Canyon
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| shockwavedj |
I like it! All of it! like your bassline, like your synths, your drums, that melody,...
Recommendations? Maybe you should enhance a bit the mids/high, boost a little the bass, and compress it. Make more present the open hat and... nothing else!
great song and great sound! |
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| Derosas |
| Cool! thanks for your comments, I'll some of those fixes. In case anyone is wondering, the bass is a layering of two basses from my DX7II + a sub bass from Virus C + a fuzzy bass from JP8080. The DX adds a lot to basses from my experience. |
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| Jay M |
Pretty decent track m8! Only thing is it lacks bass/low end. The kick is present but could use more low. The bassline is hidden. Open hihats are a bit of a blurr, but that's ok (I prefer a clearer sounding).
Nice work, you got more somewhere? |
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| EternalMusic |
Sounds nice! Some comments:
1 - The kick needs more low as Jay. So goes for the bass.
2 - Nice buildup lead.
3 - The intro+buildup, takes too long, it gets abit boring after a while. Variate + add some FX.
4 - Wonderfull transition at the break.
5 - The break itself needs a to be phatter it sounds pretty dull and simple right now. Add a substring + panned pads or strings.
6 - Typical trance melody, not bad yet nothing special
keep working ;)
Antonio. |
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| illectricpunk |
| I really like that melody. |
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| Derosas |
Update: :D
Stupid me deleted a bunch of wavs from that project, so I had to work using the entire song as a track, then add layers. I added a sub bass, sub strings, a low kick, and another layer of open hihats. Since I lost the actual project, I wasn't able to shorten the intro. After taking your great advice, my track is sounded A LOT better.
[It is late and I still have mastering and finishing touches, new sample will go here tomorrow afternoon] |
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| Sebraa |
Very uplifting! Pure pleasure for my ears!
And always backup your projects ;) |
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| thoughtlessjex |
| I like the bassline, but it could still use some more boost. I don't really like your melody, it just seems really cliched to me. The song's pretty good, but you could stand to have a somewhat more engaging melody. |
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| Subtle |
plus
nice beginning
I like the darker approach
ok pads
u got a fairly good melody
minus
beginning is a little long
the first synth is getting me tired
there is to little happening until 2:30
dont like the percussions (too much in the background)
generally too boring build up until about 3:30
synths aren`t too good
the climax reach in 4:59 is very weak,
conclusion
Well this is not bad, it is just a little boring, very little happens, and the percussions are very weak, there is no drive in the song, everything sounds very flat, u got some nice effects.. I really enjoy the track after 7:46, then I think it is really good, excellent, but I think the synths are weakening the whole track I think, and u need to work on making the track more interesting to listen too.. but I do enjoy the datk feel of the track
It is not bad it just needs more work, it sounds very reasonish (correct me if I am wrong)
keep it up |
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| Derosas |
| quote: | Originally posted by Subtle
I really enjoy the track after 7:46,
It is not bad it just needs more work, it sounds very reasonish (correct me if I am wrong)keep it up |
:stongue: after 7.46. well, at least you like the last 45 secs... I did not use reason. Actually, I used Sonar 3 and hardware synths. Shame on me for making these high quality synths sound like software.
Well the link at the top now goes to my newest version, w/ bass added. After I cry for a little while, I'll start a new track. I'll apply some of the things I learned from you all.
(me thinks to myslef)-"I am improving, some people like it, I like it. keep going, dont stop now":toothless |
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| Sirocco |
nice job man.
more lows. more highs. more punch.
;p
wait for tranceproduction.com
it will help you ;p |
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