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{*UPDATE*}[FULL 192kps ] Silverstone - A Dive Into Space (pg. 2)
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| DJ Jim Craik |
Hi mate, this isnt really the style I play usually but I enjoy this track, it reminds me of some of the more mellow Solarstone stuff.
The melody is nice and it sounds different to alot of tracks out at the moment(this is a good thing), my only gripe is that I feel you could have done alot more with the drum roll out of the break.
Well done
Jim:) |
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| auujay |
I am loving the lead and the general feel of this track so much. I think I get what you are saying about you not having a straight bassline on purpose. I find the percs a little repetative at times but I don't think you need to change it.
I think there are some chords in the piano which I am not sure sound so hot. I also have to echo the sudden change that happens at 3:29, definitly need some sort of transition because it loses so much when the lead and strings cut out. |
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| DJ_Silverstone1 |
Luvly Feedback guys!!!!!!!!!!!
what iall probably be doing is putting in a more complex transition in and sorting out the piano...cant say i really wanna do much more.
changing percs and kicks is not gonna happen... iv used many different samples for each it sounds way to complex for the chill i was going for.
iall make changes..just not to many..i got something new going now. Which i hope ur all going to like. |
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| Massive84 |
starts real relaxing.
don't like the kick there is some sound on it, or it could be clipping.
the perc needs more and it's not allive.
the transition is good, but it can be smoother, way to static imo.
synths and pads are nice, same with the voice.
piano sounds so agressive don't really like it.
keep working on it, ideas are niee, same with the chords. |
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| DJ_Silverstone1 |
yep the sound on it is from whoever took the sample. That kick fitted best honest.
again add more it becomes too complex for the chill i was going for
ty for the comment on my synths :D
iam going to change the piano dont worry |
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| Massive84 |
| quote: | Originally posted by DJ_Silverstone1
yep the sound on it is from whoever took the sample. That kick fitted best honest.
again add more it becomes too complex for the chill i was going for
ty for the comment on my synths :D
iam going to change the piano dont worry |
am not asking you to add more hats and shakers to make ASOT perc, but you can add those tiny little subtle congras mini perc and such, i love that kinda perc, 1 hihat and rest mini things. |
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| DJ_Silverstone1 |
oh my bad sorry massive...
yea iall try that! give it ago! |
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| Thunder5 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Massive84
but you can add those tiny little subtle congras mini perc and such, i love that kinda perc, 1 hihat and rest mini things. |
Yeah. and those little bling and ting sounds and such.. Which you can't be sure if you heard it from the track or are your ears just fooling you. :D |
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| Massive84 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Thunder5
Yeah. and those little bling and ting sounds and such.. Which you can't be sure if you heard it from the track or are your ears just fooling you. :D |
i didn't hear any, but if they were there they should be mroe allive, EQ? delay? reverb? etc.
i just giving him an example, it doesn't have to be a congas, or ting bling :p. |
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| Thunder5 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Massive84
i didn't hear any, but if they were there they should be mroe allive, EQ? delay? reverb? etc.
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Neither did I.. :D
| quote: | Originally posted by Massive84
i just giving him an example, it doesn't have to be a congas, or ting bling :p. |
I was also giving him an example.. |
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| Aerodrome |
| Nice idea's in the track! Tho I think your mix is a bit thin. Could use some more sounds, but I like your melodies. They're not that standard, pretty cool. Keep it up! |
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| DJ_Silverstone1 |
Hey up Corneilissen.....thanks for the comment
i think i wanted it thin... its so easy to listen this way.
glad u like the melody !!!
i want to say a massive thanks u too everyone who listened and commented on the tune...the project is now discontinued. HOWEVER, if anybody wants the more "percussive" version pm me on this board and iall give it too u!!!!!!!!
Thank U all
Digital Aura
Dawson
Ace303
Mike Foley
Massive
Thunder
Jim Craik
Auujay
Eternal Music
Sunquest
Aerodrome
Thank u for all ur comments!!!!! they were all great!!!!!!
Thank u mike for writing such a huge review went into great depth cheers. Thanks! |
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