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Absolute Fahrenheit - Fireflies (full version)
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| AbsoluteFahren |
Hey all,
This is my first tranceaddict track for show.
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Track Details:
Nice uplifting, progressive trance feel, with some vocals at the break. Seems to catch some smooth energy. 132 bpm. 8.8 megs mp3 @ 128kbps. Track Length: 9:35. I did the vocals :). Has Long Beat Intro and Outro, Bassline comes in at 1:32, Break at 3:45, Track Trails out at 8:22 to finish.In the Key of D Major.
**UPDATE DETAILS**:
Thanks for the feedback everyone. Added some more synths, smoothed out the beginning and end to not be so boring, worked on the mastering a little bit, to make that low end a little more clear, track is a little longer at 10:18, 14.4 megs mp3 @ 192kbps.
FireFlies Vocals:
Night Takes Over
As the Sunset Dies
Do You See
The Playful Fireflies?
FireFlies
FireFFFFFFFFlies
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Fast Download and Enjoy!
Feel Free to Comment. All Reviews Returned.
Thanks for Listening.
***UPDATED TO NEW VERSION***
Just 'Right Click, Save As...' Below:
Absolute Fahrenheit - Fireflies (full version) |
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| david.michael |
Pretty nice track bro. I like the bassline, and I like that electric guitar sounding deal that starts around 5:30, that's really cool.
Personally, I think the track drags out just a bit, especially due to the LONG intro and outro of nothing but drum beat. It's a good beat, don't get me wrong, there's just a lot of it.
I like the pads. :happy2:
I don't like something about the vocals, haven't really put my finger on it. Your voice sounds a little wavering, uncertain, maybe? I do like the delay on the vocals though.
Cool track! :) |
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| pho mo |
Nice tune, it's good to hear a tune in a Major key once in a while!
Needs a few more interesting elements during the journey, but the basis is good.
The bassline is very cool!
Sounds a little bit muddy, could probably do with more work on the production side of things :)
Perhaps pan out the elements a little bit more? |
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| Darkone55 |
| Well, the track is ok. The first part, before the bass comes in is a bit boring, but later on it's pretty nice to listen to. I like the little roll in the kick. I think the melody could be a bit louder. Now it sounds like 8 minutes quite the same.. But the track is ok, some points could be better (too much of the same), but I like the track for the rest. :) |
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| Jay M |
Hey
I think the start is a bit too much of the same. Some breakbeat kick and a noise. Seems that many preset sounds have been used.
Maybe this is just not my cup of tea... I do like the pad tho :D |
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| DJGemini69 |
| As a DJ, I would have to say I like the into and the out on this because it is very mix friendly! The dark sounding synths are pretty cool and I like the lighter synth in the back ground too. The vocals remind me of a group called Cause and Effect, whom I really like a lot! I really don't think this is a very bad track. Yeah, it is a little repetitive, but most trance/dance/house tracks are, you know? LOL Anyway, that's just my opinion..... |
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| Mario432 |
Listening now
WEll like said before long intro... It is a cool beat tho... You could keep such a long intro with just drums but maybe more changeups... Dont make the pattern quite so obvious. But thats kind of a personal thing... The BD sounds very mechanical to at the begining. cool but also is what starts to get anoying for me but it all evens out once the melodies and bass starts. Ooh just heard that first pad... very cool.. I'd make it a little thicker tho. Mixing may be muddy but my speakers arent top notch hehe..(PSB-300). Yeah definatly turn up your melodies tho,, I like em alot and they might be getting overpowered. I like the transitions so far though. That arpy thing is nice.. More high end for the mix or is it me and my speakers??? .. Any ways enough of my comments.. By the way I might be wrong bout some of this stuff, not any expert just my opinion. |
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| AbsoluteFahren |
Thank you all for your constructive feedback. I will do some more detail work and publish the updated file back at the top of the thread. I will just leave a message in the thread once it is updated.
Thanks for the kudos on the melodies, bassline, and vocals. With some more tweaking and refining, this could turn out to be a really nice track.
For anyone that wants/needs a review on a track, this is where I return the favor. I have already done one for david.michael. So just PM with a link and I will shoot a detailed review for ya. |
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| M1cro5lave |
Mmmmm... very nice beat, as everyone probably said already.. ;)
And you should definitively add something that gives the intro/outro some more energy. They sound so boring, but once the bassline comes in it sounds great. Pads are very nice too.
Overall.... great track, quality, beat is awesome, can't get enough of it. That's probably the best thing with this track.
I have to take a listen to it again. Such a great track, needs a better intro/outro though. |
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| AbsoluteFahren |
| Track has been updated, please download the new version at the top of this thread. I am one step closer to making this a great track, thanks to everyone's comments and constructive feedback. |
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| Massive84 |
wow what a weird tune, nice strange bass.. beat is cool indeed.
hehe i like the vocals really nice.
cool stereo image, nice panning done with the fx, i dig that (y)
alot of sounds in the intro, but i really miss that catchy something.
dreamy melody really nice.
it's a bit to long imo, gets repetitive,
i think if you short it up it would sound tighter, also adding an extra melody would not hurt :)
good luck. |
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| don_q |
Downloaded the updated ver.
Its Nice you know, not great or splendid, but nice. The type of music I liked after parties (when parties lasted 'till 9am)
:toothless
I'd say call it version 1.5 or something, as in it still needs some more. Maybe a change of melody before it ends or ... I don't know, something. My point is keep on the good work, you're almost there. |
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