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| Ziggy |
Here's a little something I had produced with VSTIs and FL.
Any comments will be appriciated :]
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| Massive84 |
your kick is way to weak.
i really don't hear a bass..
perc are to loud and to sharp, on headphones they mite kill the ear.
echo sounds sound nice , same with the fx at 2.13, seems your fx skills are good.
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string could use more attack, delay and reverb imo.
lead sounds not bad, but it doesn't really flow.
track needs serious mixing, and maybe some more stuff to add, like extra riffs.
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| djdustx |
hey mawn this is pretty good...needs some touch-ups but could be really something
anywayz msg me back im lookin for production team-ups...i'll send u some of my stuff
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| Mario432 |
Hey man yeah... this really could be something, as before editing stuff, transitions are choppy bigger bass etc.. Yeah mixing too, but the basic idea: I really like the melody, with work this could be an awesome sort of chill trance tune... love those.... Only other thing I dont like, maybe its just me but it sounds so digital computer cold (the Synths)... you know? Minly that pad behing the the echoey lead thing.... Or maybe its just Im used to my Juno 60. Anyways, just my thoughts Im definately no expert but yeah I think its cool with great idea and overall a cool groove. so yeah Keep on.....
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| pho mo |
Yeah, this sounds pretty good. Needs some nice crunchy compression though.
Really nice fx too, I love the reverby underwater sound that comes in behind the melody. Nice + moody! |
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| TheNexed1 |
| Sounds great. The only thing i would have to say is it doesnt seem to move on. Its like ur on a never ending page and dont go anywhere. There is some fowardness but then it seems to go right back. I dont know one thing about producing or creating music but i would love to learn. Besides spinning, producing is my next thing to learn or would like to. So dont take it personally cuz this statement is coming from a nobody. But i like tones and the rhythm just seems like it needs some variety and work. Aim me at nexed23 if u have aol, i would like to chat with ya!:gsmile: |
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| Ziggy |
Hey Guys,
Thank you for all your comments, I will try to rework some stuff
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| Ziggy |
Hey,
I reworked some stuff, tried to make the percussion more electronic,
and tweaked few things here and there :) Any comments will
be great.
NEW UPDATED VERSION:
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| Ziggy |
Hey,
I reworked some stuff, tried to make the percussion more electronic,
and tweaked few things here and there :) Any comments will
be great.
NEW UPDATED VERSION:
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