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| Mr Rogers |
| holy bud....i'm a techno head, and i loooove it! i;ve been listening to these TA tunes for bout a week now, and lot of them lack depth. Ur tune is amazing. PM me if possible, i'd love to get more of ur tracks. thanx |
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| DJGemini69 |
This is my first time reviewing music here on Trance Addict and it's a great way to start! I love the synth work you put into this! This is one hell of a fine jam! Hey, I am putting some mixes together (mainly trance and house) and I would LOVE to use this in my next mix! You can hear two of the mixes on my site at http://www.djgemini69.com Have a listen, let me know! i would LOVE to mix this!!!!!!! Oh.... this is way tight!!!!!!
GREAT JOB!!!!!!!:toocool: |
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| pho mo |
Cheers guys, thanks heaps for the positive feedback :)
DJGemini69 - looking forward to hearing your new mix full of TA songs. |
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| Mario432 |
Great tune...
Im new here and have to say Im amazed at the quality of the tunes here.. Maybe just my amatuer ears, some forums have a lot more crap.. Must be cause of the 96kbs rule ;) ... ... hehe Reminds me a little of Voyage into Trance... Quality stuff... I guess the only thing I can say is it sounds very very standard..N But Im sure that was the aim in some sense..
By the way I have a show at my local radiostation where I like to play stuff from new unknown people so If its cool Ill play this???
I just heard somthing about FCC rules and Mp3's... Anyone know more about this?? Anyways fun stuff!
Miroslav |
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| pho mo |
Yeah sure mate, I'd be more than happy if for you to play it on your radio show!
And if for some weird FCC reason there is a problem playing mp3s, then I can always send you the .wav file, just pm me.
About the song sounding "standard" - yeah, I'm still learning about production; so in a way that is the aim. cheers :) |
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| Ceyram |
| it's a realy nice man ... keep the good work !!! |
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| Stories |
| I totally dig this, reminds me somewhat of a Cosmic Gate feel... totally rocks my world. I love the breakdown and the main synth! |
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| DJ-Kreing^^ |
Very nice tune man!
Just a few things that got my attention:
- The whole thing kicks a bit to fast I think. I like tunes which open with some moody pads as an intro, but that’s just my personal taste a guess.
- The bass isn’t deep enough, a deeper more pumping bass could add great energy to your tune.
- I love your lead synth, the sine based one. Very original, adds a lot to the overall atmosphere.
- 3:55 – Nice break beat part… and I love it how everything kicks in at 4:09, but you could have made this kick in abit more dramatic. Maybe by adding a small silent part followed by some snare rolls and some nice wosh effect.
- Very nice melody, very original.
Overall you did a great job, sounds really good for a third track.
Keep up the good work!
:) |
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| pho mo |
Cheers for the feedback, and the tips.
About the intro, right now I'm forgetting intros + outros on my tunes because once I've done the current block of 7 or 8 I'm going to mix them all in together; so hopefully the intro serves the DJ better than the casual listener :)
I'm definitely going to go back and revisit the bass, because I totally agree, it needs to really pump and drive the tune along.
Thanks again for listening! Any more comments? |
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| M1cro5lave |
Strange... I thought I posted a comment about this track. Maybe I just imagined I did or something, lol.
Anyways...
It's not really what I'm used to listen to, but this one isn't so bad at all. The kicks sounds ok, the melody is a bit boring at times, but when mixed with the rest of the sounds it does sound good actually. So basically I shouldn't complain about it. :)
This isn't a track that really catches you at the first moment. Listen to it two, three or even four times and you'll be surprised what this one actually has. Honestly I didn't like it when I first heard it, but now I'm really digging it! And it's not even my style.
Damn good work I must say, and thx for expanding my taste of music style ;) |
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| Jay M |
Hey m8
Got some nice sounds going on here, but I think they could sound a bit phatter if you'd just put some chorus or so over the main synths.
I'm not a kick expert, but this one sounds a bit short.
The lead synth is playing this nice melody very low, it sounds a bit awkward, as if someone tries to sing a unreachable low note.
Nice twinkling synths through the mix, nice work on that.
Getting a bit bored now, tho. More breaks, hint hint!
Are you using a lot of saw-synth. Maybe a bit too much, try to use different sounds (sine-, pulse-based synths) in your track!
Hope that helps. Overall good work! Keep up!
-Jay |
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