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Sample [~6 mins 128kb/s Hard Trance]
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| Judge |
Hi Music Lovers,
ok about 6 months ago i posted my first track to get
some feedback. Much to do in real-life - i had not
much time working on this song but now i think i can
give you a second try.
here's my work:
judge-sample_hardtrance.mp3 (right click save as)
I hope you'll enjoy listening and i would be pleased
to get some feedback again. The track is still work
in progress.
greetings from cloudy bavaria
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| pho mo |
crrrrraaaaank it man. squash the hell out of it.
the sample starts out really well, there's some great sounds in there ( e.g. 1:21 )
at around 2:00 it begins to come together well.
i like my hard trance a lot darker than some of the melodies in here. I'd remove anything that sounds even the slightest bit happy and get that attitude going.
all in all a great start, i'm looking forward to hearing the finished track! |
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| Judge |
Hi There,
ok first big thx for this Feedback. Yesterday i've played around with some patterns and throw out the piano part. Created a nice fill and think you're right: It doesn't match the rest of the style (the happy piano).
What are you thinking about the beats? Right to go on with them or should i change something?
Hope to get some more Feedback from other people ^^ ;)
Greetings from Bavaria
Tom |
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| Stephano |
If I were you, I'd soften the kick a bit and make it a more "boom"-ing sound. This kick would fit in a hardcore track, not a hard-trance one. As said before, the piano shouldn't be there either (I think you got your styles mixed up a bit, but then again, music is creativity so why not try it?) For the rest it's nice, but not great.
You should also change the way the track stops. Give it a little bit of an outro. It doesn't have to be a long one, but this version just stops. Keep practicing! |
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