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<Trance> ConXioN - New Sunrise, New Day (192kbs)[Full}
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| conexion |
Changed again after your feedback and much head scartching:conf:
Timing problems sorted, I think!
Produced using Cubase VST & E-MU XtremeLead, Vintage Pro, E5000 and A-Station on the hardware front and Superwave Trance Pro and V-Station on the software side.
MP3 - 192kbs
Size - 10,914Kb
I promise I wont post this again but, your feedback is appreciated.
New Sunrise, New Day |
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| M1cro5lave |
My first thought is that you should work on the frequences and the mastering a bit more to make it sound more smooth and clean. Imo it sounds way to high at certain points.
Kicks are ok, not perfect though. A simple intro, not very full of energy, quite simple hats too... not my taste really.
Strings are okay, maybe lower them just a little bit, but that's just my opinion.
I'm not a big fan of the melody either. The general sound is ok, but I don't like the track really. You need to work on it some more imo. |
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| pho mo |
There are an amazing amount of breakdowns in this song, backed up equally by the amount of ideas you have going on. While keeping it interesting, I think it lacked a little bit of focus.
Having said that, some of the parts of the song ( sorry I can't remember them all, there are so many! ) were excellent, I think my favourite bits were around 2:00 and 4:00 (although then at 4:09 that synth could possibly come in a bit less abruptly.) I really liked the way that just before the 4:00 bit, it seemed like it was about to kick back in, but instead did something unexpected, brought in the lush piano line. Nice!
The very first synth (00:27) was a little bit harsh on my ears, needs some EQ!
There are some really nice elements in this tune, and I really like the mood that it has. |
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| conexion |
Some you win, some you lose!
There are only 3 breakdowns and it was done to keep it interesting.
And microslave, the highs are meant to be there! It's meant to have impact. If I made the intro more complex, I would have had comments that the intro was to complex! You cant win some time. But its your opinion and welcome all the same.
Anyothers!! |
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| DJ-Kreing^^ |
Here are a few things that got my attention while listening:
- Everything sounds kind of filtered, work some more on the mastering. Maybe try EQing your lead synths and adding them some more high and mid high frequencies.
- Find yourself a different kick sample, its to flat and weak. Try adding a kick sample that’s got abit higher sound, it might help.
- The lead synth kicks in way to early. Try using something different for the intro.
- Like someone already mentioned there are a lot of break downs, to much of them IMO, makes the tune sound kind of sluggish it should be more flowing.
- Many creative ideas in this piece.
Overall there are lots of great ideas but try working abit harder on your sound the next time.
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| dj dawson uk |
not meaning to sound nasty.. but the start really sounds like something that could be made in [eJay] :( after that.. it starts to get going.. and as mentioned before the hats are a bit on the simple side.. another eJay thing it has going for it.. is the amount of changes.. it seems theres a new melody to follow every 16 bars.. you could probably seperate them into different songs.. lol - you could have an album from them :D
but the techniques are there. jus work on it some more..
nice piano.. almost U2 style :P timing on the arp sems a little bit out my man.. mite want to get that fixed.. as it's very offputting
it's not something a DJ could use.. as there doesn't seem to be any uniformity to the timing :conf:
keep going on it though!!! it has potential
Steve |
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| Subtle |
Plus
some nice parts
piano around 4:00 is good
minus
The sounds are too high freq
mastering is not that good
percussions to much in the backround
boring
to messy
conclusion
Well I think it doesnt start up very well, too much noise, I think u should work on the percussion, it sounds like there are only 1 open hi hat, and a kickdrum.. and I think the synths are really hurting my ear, prop cause of the high frequences and the high volume, and I think the whole arrangement of the track is very messy, the track isnt really leadin to anywhere, and the melody is very messed around, I cant really figure WHAT the melody excactly is.. and the track is too long, there are hardly any intro or outro, no effects...
sorry for the harsh review, but a man needs to be honest.. ;) |
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| conexion |
An honest review is better than no review.
They are all apreciated.
Percussion, Always have problems with that.
Too many ideas, I seem to let them all out at once.
More restraint, me thinks:D
Then again it is only my third track!!!!!!
Thanks again to all those who have responded.
(Now going to empty my head into a bucket, and take my time!) |
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| Subtle |
| very good work for being your third track... ;) I remember my third track :rolleyes: |
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