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Terry Woodward - Shanghai Moment <Melodic Trance / 06:23 / 140bpm / 128kbps>
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| Woody4eva |
Here's a track I just finished, I think it's pretty neat. Any feedback appreciated.
Click the pic for the MP3 if you haven't realised already. :) |
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| pho mo |
Nice tune there. The melody is really nice. My "shanghai moment" came at 2:07 :)
I think that the bass sounds a little bit weak, which is a little to do with the chord progression, and a little to do with the sound you've chosen.
Overall nice work! |
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| Thunder5 |
OK lets hear this. :D
Melodies are nice and chilled.
The bass is a maybe a bit too weak.. Could be fixed like pho mo said.. or just a EQing issue. :)
Hah.. Was there a break or not. Got to listen again to make sure. :) |
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| djkoolaide |
OK.. as I listen I will comment.
Intro is good.
As the others have said, bass is weak.
Lead and background synths are good, well-balanced.
I'd say just fix the bass and it's a good track! |
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| Woody4eva |
Thanks for the comments guys.
I had a bit of an issue with the bass; as I've got a subwoofer, I didn't know at which setting would make it sound normal on everyone elses speakers. I had actually EQed alot of bass off of the sub bass, and it was still adequately bassy on my speakers. I guess I will just add some more of those lower frequencies and then the bass won't be so weak for everyone else. :cool:
Thanks again. |
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| Massive84 |
cool perc at the start.
first bassline is funky.
Ah now second bassline, have to get used to these kinda bass sounds.
kick could use a bit of more volume, maybe 2-4.
nice sounds in the intro.
there is a sudden bass chord change in the intro, not so keen about that.
the acid line sounds so 3osc, needs to be more better imo.
i wish the breakdown had some nice phat square pads.
ya i agree i do feel some Shanghai moments in this tune, due the leads i think, i don't know why hehe.
Synth choices are nice, expect maybe the bass and acidline.
the main part needs something imo, no idea what, just that little extra.
Nice work, 7/10. |
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