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Convergence - In Dreams
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| DjSimonB |
Been working on this tune for several weeks and now I'm finally quite happy with it. It's much more complex than my last effort, Nothing Lasts Forever, so harder to produce/mix... it's a little bit Thrillseekers style, but dark-edged too, and with a cool melody... tell me what you think of the tune :)
LINK HERE
btw, thanks to Fahad (Massive) who gave me some bits of help throughout the making of the tune :) |
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| alanzo |
intro is too long and without melody.. it's at 2min and I want to change the track becuase i'm bored.. percussion is decent.. but the ride hat you have on the kick is a bit loud.. but the bass/percussion is good for the most part..
breakdown needs a bassey pad or something in the beginning of it..
at 4:30 now.. melody is rather simple and airy.. maybe that's the style you were going for though..
pretty cool break at around 5:00
overall the track was a bit too boring for my tastes.. but maybe others like it more? |
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| Thunder5 |
Intro seemed to be a bit too long...
Oh yes the breakdown definedly needs somekind of substring or something filling the low freqs in the beginning.
Not a floorfiller, but more like a nice track to chill with.
Overall it is pretty nice track.
Keep on working. :D |
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| Massive84 |
hey simon
Like i said on msn, it's pretty fine for your third production.
just keep making and practicing :) |
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| DjSimonB |
| Thanks for the comments guys... yeah it's only my third finished track so it's not gonna be amazing. I know I need more practice on making good intros that capture the listener's attention... |
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| djxtension |
Overall it's not a bad track at all. A few points though:
- The clap is annoying the out of me, maybe change it to a shorter and 'lighter' clap
- As said before, the intro is too boring, try adding some background melodies, sound-effects or maybe a voice to spice it up a bit
- Breakdown needs 'the bassey pad', as mentioned by alanzo
But overall, it's very good for a third production. Keep it up! |
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| DjSimonB |
| quote: | Originally posted by djxtension
- The clap is annoying the out of me, maybe change it to a shorter and 'lighter' clap
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Haha I know what you mean, that clap really could be better... it was one of these things I only really noticed when I'd already exported and started uploading (I noticed it was a bit dodgy before but then I thought I managed to fix it) and by the time I realised that I really couldn't be bothered with export, compress/normalise, upload, all over again.
And if you guys think the intro was boring, you should've heard it before I put in the secondary synth and subtle perc :o |
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