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JL - Wicked Storm (original mix) (pg. 2)
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| eulerfx |
Like others said, definalty expand on that intro. Its a great start and I know that once you're in that creative vibe you can keep going and going.
I actually like the kicks and how they come in and especially all those sfx percusions in the bg, but the track doesnt really do it for me. It sounds cheesy at times, then sometimes sounds pretty good. Don't get me wrong, its pro, but doesnt live up to the amazing intro. |
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| TOR |
wow, what an amazing melody and synth about 5 minutes into the track.. :eyes:
that said, the mix needs some work.. sounds overcompressed to me, which reduces the power of the track, even though the kick is banging.
for the rest i agree with auujay.. plenty of good ideas, but too much for one track.
would like to have a midi though, some great melodies in there i'd like to play around with :D |
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| Dj Tilo |
really like the intro just the beat comes to "early"
if you know what I mean.
The Synth in the background at around 2:00 is really driving(I like it!) and the main Melody is just awesome. |
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| alanzo |
| quote: | Originally posted by kewlness
sorry for bumping my own thread heh...
but thanks for those Euler, TOR, and Tilo for your comments
and also if anyone wants to play around with any of the melodies... you can use these midis ;)
http://individual.utoronto.ca/jeanl...rmRemixPack.zip
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i'll take u up on that.. so long as I can post it on my website :P
I'll post a link to it in here when I'm done.. should be about a week or so.. |
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| kewlness |
| quote: | Originally posted by alanzo
i'll take u up on that.. so long as I can post it on my website :P
I'll post a link to it in here when I'm done.. should be about a week or so.. |
cool, will be looking forward to hearing it |
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| wwu.punisher |
| Wow. I like this track a lot. Nice work. |
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| Sunquest |
beautifal intro :D
all good quality sounds
song is very summer at first, relaxing melody, then its pumping :D
i think only thing u gotta fix is the compression on the kick and beats, it goes in too deep i cant explain :S
but its great stuff,
keep it up mm8
peace out |
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| pho mo |
Really nice tune! The mastering is slightly weird, I love the deep bass sound but if was just a little more present then that would totally rock.
I don't agree with the others about there being too many elements, I just really enjoyed listening to all the parts come in. The hi hat sounds cool! I like the way it anticipates the kick.
Cool wobbly synth. Excellent melody at 5:00. If the mixing was fixed up then I reckon at 5:40 you've got yourself a killer dancefloor moment.
Oh yeah, and I'm glad that kick drum isn't too loud; I'm really hungover and a massive kick wouldn't have been too good for me today...
Great work! |
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| alanzo |
my remix of this track is done.. I didn't use the main lead/melody becuase I didn't really like it much.. however, I did expand on the intro of the original becuase that was my favorite part ;)
It's a bit short and is definitly not "dance-able" but is mixable..
JL - Wicked Storm (Armana Remix)
Length: 4min 3sec
Bitrate: 192Kbps
Production Time: about 8 hours stretched over 2 days |
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| kewlness |
wow, this is sounding quite cool heh. I like how you decided to focus on one part of the track and develop it and add your own ideas...
However, my main complaint is that it's too short!!! :(
Anyways, i think you should post a new thread about it and i'll close this thread |
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| alanzo |
| quote: | Originally posted by kewlness
However, my main complaint is that it's too short!!! :(
Anyways, i think you should post a new thread about it and i'll close this thread |
I tried to put in the main lead after the piano part but it just didn't sound right.. If I had put the piano part first like you did it may of been a bit easier to bring in the main lead... but I couldn't get your lead to "in my own way".. meaning it would of just been the same rythem/melody as the original.. which would of been a little lame..
but like I said.. I didn't really like the main lead much anyway and that the piano part was my favorite..
I'll post a thread for this track, if you like |
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