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Darren Tate vs. Jono Grant - Let The Light Shine In (Project Seven Remix) [160] Full
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| DJ-Kreing^^ |
Hi there!
Comments as I listen:
Nice percussive intro.
The bassline is very original, though I feel this one off beat sample isn’t enough. Try adding some more layers, make the bassline fuller and add some depth to it.
1:51 – Here comes your main lead synth. IMO you should have kept that synth for the build up and the main riff. It came up to early and sort of reviled your tune's central element.
I love the little acid line which plays throughout the tune.
Nice use of the vocal.
But overall your tune sounds kind of monotonic to me, the percussion doesn’t even change from start to finish, and the same goes for most of your main sounds, Makes the tune sound very repetitive and a bit boring.
What might help is adding some more nice effects that will come in during the intro and the part after the main riff.
Maybe try adding another layer of different sounding synths, try adding some parts with different percussion stuff like that. |
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| Subtle |
thx for your comment... u are right about the lead synth.. should definitely be more layers.. and the first synth doesnt fit that well.. some congo percussions and extra percussions would help alot... I will work more on this track for sure
thx! |
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| DJ_LOOPer |
| This is really good work! Nice sound! I didn't listened to the original version, but remix is great!!!! |
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| Subtle |
| thx, glad u like it :) |
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| Massive84 |
cool remix subtle.
my only complain or suggesting would be to add more a bit than that saw lead, an arp, riffs etc. |
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| Subtle |
| quote: | Originally posted by Massive84
cool remix subtle.
my only complain or suggesting would be to add more a bit than that saw lead, an arp, riffs etc. |
I only wish I hadd the MIDI for the arp in the original track :nervous: |
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| djfred500 |
hey wow in the middle its nice how u bring in the lead but the rythm is the same all thru out the song kinda gets boring until the leads kicks in and gets u thinking whats this hurry...but over all if this was pressed on vinyl i will play it and vocals are awesome nicely placed overall 8/10
keep up the good work |
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