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Underwater - Undiscovered places [FINAL] (pg. 4)
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| craigp |
im very into this tune!
defo hope to hear it out!
plods along nicely, nice melody and bassline.
good work mate!;) |
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| MaRt |
| I'm not always keen on tracks that evidently want to be Above and Beyond productions, but I guess in this case I can make an exception. ;) This is really well produced and mastered, and all the 'necessary' elements are present and correct. It's just a shame it isn't more distinctive, then I wouldn't feel as guilty for liking it! :D |
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| carl-b.mine.nu |
| amazing tune! love the part after 3 min! sounds incredible.. wish I could do stuff like that.. tho the beat could be improved... doesnt sound as tight as I would want to have it.. |
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| Mike_Foyle |
I listened to this before, but it seems i didnt post! coulda sworn i did! anyway...awsome melody. really nicely produced as well. i like all the ambient sounds in the break, they are very suitabley placed, unlike in alot of tracks that try that effect, where they just sound random! sounds really really nice. could do very well if you sent off to some labels. try anjuna for sure. keep it up :)
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dont like the breakbeat, around 5:30 ish could do with some complexity and use a different kick to the one in the main body of the track, a lighter one with a longer decay i would suggest. breakbeats are awsome when they are really complex, and i think in this track one like that would work really well. the one u used in that little section is a bit repetative for my liking. anyway thats just down to taste and besides that its an awsome track :) |
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| Dj_Underwater |
| Yeah,i think that's a good idea to use different kick for breakbeat. Thanx Mike,will do like you said ;) |
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| Dr. Pils |
Listening now...
nice intro..
ooh.. nice melody..:happy2:
:tongue3 I'm diggin this...
cool track.:cool: |
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| Lakeus |
Really awesome track!!! I canīt say anything else.... just great!!
Cheers, Lakeus |
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| montana |
| i loved waterplanet and i like this aswell, reminds much of the old anjuna sound and i was a big fan of that sound, bassline is proper nice, also nice lead, like the epic breakdown and the melody is nice, like the fx in the breakdown. the breakbeat section is strange, it sounda bit generic and kinda strangeky placed as it gets overlooked by the sound synths, but anyhow, this is great, cheers man |
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| retiro |
wow man your fast becoming one of my top ten producers! the fx throughout the tune is splendid - keeps you interested! the best thing atm is you've stayed away from that common ASOT sound! Some female vocal breathy style one shots wouldn't go a miss throughout the tune!
This is well deserving of a record deal mate! You have captured my heart with both Waterplanet and Undiscovered Places well done mate and keep up the great work!
retiro |
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| dannyc |
| really like this tune mate. its your basic happy uplifter with a nice feel good factor about it, if not a blatant rip-off of armin's burning with desire in parts. but apart from that its great.love your use of effects and that breakdown just takes you away. great job mate, you've got some skills. |
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| Trancevision |
a very very very standard track. Good mix and mastering, nice melodies and so on...could get signed :D , but...it's only a track like hundreds with similar sounds, elements and so on. :rolleyes:
And it is rather difficult to recognize your own style in this tune ( if you plan to have something like this...):rolleyes:
Trancevision |
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| en2t |
nice percussions and bass in this. The synths in the intro are a bit muddy and need more eq'ing to make them more audible and distinguishable from the other elements in the track. Test the track a bit on your speakers (not headphones) and you'll hear what i'm talking about. At the break now, I like all the little effects and synths playing, very intricate and nice. Okay main melody strings are coming in now. Melody is pretty nice so far, let's see how it develops. Pretty cool melody and main lead indeed, I see why there's a bit of a hype about this track here, nice =) This track has a lot of potential, and you have everything there, but just eq the lead and the other melodic instruments so that they stand out and really strike the listener without him having to listen extra carefully in order to hear the exact melody. Get what i mean? But overall, top notch work.
Stan. |
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