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The 400 - Tsunami
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| zef |
Hello Everyone,
This is my first time posting my music up in this forum, so I'm a bit nervous. Anyways, I'm looking for some honest critiques. The song I want you guys to listen to is "Tsunami" but don't hesitate to listen to the rest I have posted up. They aren't the final version since I still need to put in the vocals. Anyways the link is:
http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.as...s=169948&T=4123
Thanks in advance for the feedback. |
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| soundrush |
i realy like how this one flows... most of the sounds are very unique and sound absolutely pro to me, thats cool. bassdrum gives the whole tune a solid touch.
actually, the only thing to zing is the buildup.
anyway, great track... |
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| Jay M |
I think the start is too busy, i think you'll get more with less.. Percs are a bit too simple, try too add a few closed hihat and bongo's or so. You definately need to clear up the mix, try to cut some low freqs of your synths. The snare roll you use reminds me of the 80s, which i don't quite like, try to get them more subtle. Hope this helps.
Melody is ok, it's actually quite relaxing. Keep up and keep experimenting! And listen to other tracks often, try to figure out how the buildups are in them.
Greets,
-Jay |
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