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[trance] Syntagma vs. Pjotr G - Fusion
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Pjotr G
download:
http://homepage.uvt.nl/~s216887/sam...rGProject01.mp3

version 1 of our collaboration, open to change. So if you have comments, they can be used :)
Amfora
Nice track u have there, like the techno thing in the beginning.
but when the main lead is running on his own the sound is missing some power. Maybe u can put an extra lower layer on that one. th melody is very nice. Keep up the good work.

Greetz from Johan ([email protected])
dj_alfi
at first it was techno, and then out of nowhere, trance entered... and i was confused:conf: -free after Lewis Black :P

me likes... nice bassline, and phat perc thingies... sounds really pro... the mel is sweet too... i like this ;D
DjCommisad
hope this is updated compared to the sample john sent me a few days ago!!!

ill give it a listen! cheers pjotr!

*edit*
i can't stop playing this over and over. :P

not much i'd change, just little nit picking.

3:40, crescendo buildup there is a bit fast, might want to try starting it a tad sooner.
sounds overall like it needs a bit of mastering to give it a fuller overall sound, but otherwise, me likes.

length is good, but we only get like 2-3 mins of the sweet part of the track. hehe. maybe run a couple more phrases of it? not sure, maybe i'm being way overly picky when really i should back off and just compliment u guys. im glad u got john back in the studio!

like i said, i have it in my winamp going over and over. hehe.
dj dimwit
Thanks guys! We will use the tips and comments for sure.
Sunclyder
Good work!!! :) Without reservation :) Nice, nice, nice.

Keep it up.

Greetings
GelatinPufF
Syntagma: I ing loved your remix of "damaged". It was my 2nd favourite in the comp:)


*dowloading now*

quote:
Originally posted by Amfora
Nice track u have there, like the techno thing in the beginning.
but when the main lead is running on his own the sound is missing some power. Maybe u can put an extra lower layer on that one. th melody is very nice. Keep up the good work.

Greetz from Johan ([email protected])


:eek:
dj dimwit
quote:
Originally posted by GelatinPufF
Syntagma: I ing loved your remix of "damaged". It was my 2nd favourite in the comp:)


Thanks! :toocool:
pho mo
Hi m8, I really like this tune. Your use of rhythm is great; really nice percussion and rhythm effects. The arrangement of the song is excellent as well. The melody is nice and distinctive.
The only thing I didn't like was there was too much choppy synth-work, heaps and heaps of synths with a short release. I reckon if you included some other synth with longer notes / release times, then that would provide a beautiful contrast to the rest of the tune. Really nice work on this one!
david.michael
quote:
Originally posted by Amfora
Nice track u have there, like the techno thing in the beginning.
but when the main lead is running on his own the sound is missing some power. Maybe u can put an extra lower layer on that one. th melody is very nice. Keep up the good work.

Greetz from Johan ([email protected])


Agreed on all counts
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