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| conexion |
This is not really my thing. But I personally cannot fault the production.
My only criticism would be the bass line at 4.00, it seems to falter in some way, feeling slightly out of time. But I cant quite say how. Maybe its just my ears:)
But as I said nice production. |
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| State of Matter |
| Sounds good, very abstract and trippy. But I agree, the bassline does seem offbeat around the 4:00 mark. |
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| montana |
| hmm, like the ideas & sounds, but it doesn't quite work for me in general |
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| EliPsE |
It seems you have improved from your first track. I like all the ideas on this track except sum of the things sound a bit off, like the little lead you got there,synth in middle and the piano. Could be the delay settings? after 5min the bass seems to be very low.
Anyway, pretty good just needs a lil work here and there
keep it up |
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| Digital Aura |
There we go...
Fixed the timing by quantizing the pads and the leads...
Changed the ending...
Remastered for punchier, louder mix.
Is this better?:rolleyes: |
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| Sunquest |
hurray for canadian producers :D
sounds are very nice, then at 3:30 or whatever nice synth comes in, very PVD ish from LOVE PARADE in 1999 :D
and DAMN , nice breakbeat BASS
THATS LOUD!!!!!
ing quality id love to hear in a club :D
the voice is kewl :D
it actually sounds like a trance/ rnb track hehe
great track,
keep producing :D |
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| Massive84 |
cool start.
very cool start.....
ok now you should add some perc layers small ones, like from 1.24? to make it intresting.
3.01 oo i like that synth.
hmm snareroll..wtf? 4/4 and a hardstyle bass?
ahh, you should kept this in theme ambient and relaxing, i don't like that bassline, it's funky but don't really do it for in this.*this is taste btw*
that guitar kinda lead(distorted?) is nice, piano also.
can't say alot about the mixing, headphones review :p.
yup someone improved alot :). |
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| Digital Aura |
K ..thx Massive and Sunquest. I'm thinkin of making a CHILL only version of this because of everyones feedback.
Cheers! |
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| TriXed |
| Yeah judging from what ive heard from the start.. 3.35 in.. Really chilling and would be great for a chill out type tune :) Very nice work! |
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| josh |
Idea is that and very soothing and nice mate!
But the only complain I will say is the bassline. I personally dun like that kind of 'harsh' bassline to be in when the rest of ur song sound so comfy. Try something not so harsh and perhap u try Eq it?
Well done mate! Good job! Cheers! |
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