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Josho - Fantasy (192kbps)
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| josh |
Hi guys,
I had did the Chill song out recently. Some of the part are still fixing at the meantime as I running out of ideas. Care to give a little comments which i can improve on it?
Thanks :D :D
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| Massive84 |
ok first thing i notice is that the kick is not really strong enough.
you mite wanne make the perc a bit more intresting imo.
nice fx things.
you have some nice melodies, but lack of perc varation makes this tune a bit repetatitve.
don't know you say it's your first attempt to something chill, what do you usually make? |
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| josh |
first time doing chill.
i did trance as well. but always failure. LOL but currently making one . will post up when i finished it.
Thankz for the comments will look out for it. I plan to rework everything. koz i always stuck at the repeatin melody. :) |
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| pho mo |
I agree, chill definitely relies on awesome drums. The drums sounds here are a bit machiney, try to make them more human.
Nice tune though, I really enjoyed listening to it! Good for Friday arvo at work :) And best of luck with your trance endeavours! |
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