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Carl B - all day (static blue remix) UPDATED !!! 128 quality !!!
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| xternal |
heyyy everyone !
I'd like you to listen to my remix of this AMAZING track from Carl B. I'm sure it still needs work :) but i'm happy with the result tho !!!
EDIT : FINISHED version has just been uploaded. its DJ friendly now, and many other little changes. Let me know what u think :-)
EDIT : 18/01/05 > the link is down. If anybody wants a fullie PM me ;)
genre : uplifting
length : 7 min 52
quality : 128
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carl B - all day (static blue remix)
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Hope you like it, feedback is appreciated !! thanx !
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| Massive84 |
where have you been?? :)
well this starts great imo, nice sounds indeed.
cool bass!, introduce the bass with a crash also :).
nice synths so far and small details.
1.53 i expected some layerd perc, hihat and such there for drive, should start there imo, because you snare rolling :p
cool break with that choir or pad?
main lead synth is ok
overall this tune need some arrangement work, it lacks drive sometimes, sometimes the beat stops, perc lacks layers aswell, and i think the hihat is to loud but i am not very sure about that.
thats all mate :). |
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| xternal |
cheers !
i admit there isnt so much percussion going at the same time .. but be sure i'll do something about that before mastering ;)
thx for reply !
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| xternal |
| any more advices before i work on it again ? :) |
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| BuRoLovesTrance |
| I have listened to this....Man this is something very cool a like it alot, keep it up :) |
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| xternal |
| thanx BuRo ! Happy you liked it :D |
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| davidemonin |
Like the little intro. Nice work for the buildup until the breakdown. Nice smoothing pad. After the breakdown, well, not as energetic as in the original for the main melody, but still nice. Work that sound used for the main melody or used another sound for it maybe, don't like it as much.
Maybe the levels/mastering needs a little work, but can't really judge as well since this is only at 96kbps!
Overall, pas mal, c'est un bon effort. Bien de trouver un autre francais qui produis de la trance.;) |
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| xternal |
cheers david !!
(content de voir que je suis pas le seul francais ici :D)
i agree, mastering does need work! it hasnt been done yet ! ;)
i will try and see what is wrong with the main parts dynamics too !
static blue |
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| Sunquest |
sounding really good :D
ur version is more chilly than the original :D
but i still think this is a little empty :S , u can try changing the melody a little? or add a diff note to the bass? it sounds a little too much like the original to be honest...
keep workin at it :) |
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| xternal |
| thanx sunquest ! i will :D |
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| xternal |
| CHANGES CHANGES CHANGES !!! :D |
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