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echosystm |
I'm really starting to like progressive trance like markus schulz and stuff, so i thought i'd give it a go myself. This is my first attempt at this so don't expect too much :D
HELLO I AM AN MP3
Can people tell me what ive done wrong/right please? And any general improvements? I'm not really too familiar with the composition of such songs so i know i'm way off the mark here :rolleyes:
Thankyou
PS. I used a few of Sciroccos samples from that pack he made :) |
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h.vox |
quote: | Originally posted by echosystm
I'm really starting to like progressive trance like markus schulz and stuff, so i thought i'd give it a go myself. This is my first attempt at this so don't expect too much :D
HELLO I AM AN MP3
Can people tell me what ive done wrong/right please? And any general improvements? I'm not really too familiar with the composition of such songs so i know i'm way off the mark here :rolleyes:
Thankyou
PS. I used a few of Sciroccos samples from that pack he made :) |
It is pretty nice. Just the hi-hats are too loud. And since it is one really mellow track, i think it should be like 5-6 bpm slower. It would be good to substitute those hats with some nice bassline, and add one higher note on those strings to make them more interesting. |
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Biatchzxz |
I think u have something good going, Def need to EQ. But i usually do that as i go or later on.. I am actually trying to go for a similar sound as the tracks that markus schulz plays. What you have as a beginning is actually what i am trying to make and have a problem with.. Just the whole actual vibe and movement with really no percussion..
What did u use |
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Trancefered |
Wow! If this is your first try ever, I am seriously impressed! That vibe you got going with those "waterish" effects was really great! Just as everyone else said, bring down the volume on the hats a bit...
Peace,
Trancefered |
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echosystm |
I used zeta for the pad sound, absynth for the weird sound, and absynth again for the little melody.
I'm gonna make sure I bring the hats down a bit (late night, just listened to it now, what was i thinking?! :D).
Does it sound very progressive? How do i give it more energy? sounds really lacking to me.
And also, can anyone name a synth and preset which would be good for a bassline? I'm not sure how to do those rolling basslines, so, seeing it in a preset would really help!
Thankyou :) |
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Sexomatic |
the tRACK page not found sounds good |
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