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nick_mahoney - the Timewalker
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| nickmahoney |
hello, i've worked pretty hard on mastering with this one cause i like it. its kinda a tribally progressive track with some pressure and a hypnotic persian sample i dug up off something...
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The Timewalker |
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| nickmahoney |
| >cricket cricket< |
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| Jay M |
Hey mate.
Let me spit some constructive criticism:
Percs are cool but watch out for that bubbling effect.. a tad too much. Bass needs more color IMO, so some more high freqs. It drowns.
Whole mix is a bit muddy.
Ok there is some nice experiment going on, nice how you played with the fx. It has some feel of an arabic party or so (if something like that exist). The vocals are cool. The surprising speed up is original. This is hard to dance to (for most people, some will try to gabber to this lol). But I like listening to it. Try to watch the levels.
-Jay |
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| nickmahoney |
| quote: | Originally posted by Jay M
Hey mate.
Let me spit some constructive criticism:
Percs are cool but watch out for that bubbling effect.. a tad too much. Bass needs more color IMO, so some more high freqs. It drowns.
Whole mix is a bit muddy.
Ok there is some nice experiment going on, nice how you played with the fx. It has some feel of an arabic party or so (if something like that exist). The vocals are cool. The surprising speed up is original. This is hard to dance to (for most people, some will try to gabber to this lol). But I like listening to it. Try to watch the levels.
-Jay |
thanks for your feedback jay... youre right, the speed up surprise could be kinda undanceable, i think i've been playing to much DDR :D |
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| nickmahoney |
| anyone else have a second to take a listen? bueller? |
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| pho mo |
| well mr. mahoney, i must say i enjoyed listening to your tune! i thought the mix was pretty good, the tune pretty lively. you've used rhythm really well all through. the slow down / speed up was incredibly distracting, but fun :) I like nice slow synth hits with harmonic feedback too. |
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| nickmahoney |
| thanks for the comments mr. mo. i dont quite know if the speed up would totally destroy a club or if it would send it into overdrive, but it is too distracting as it is. i might look for a remix :D |
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