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Sunquest Vs. Heatwave - Unclear Phantasy
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| Sunquest |
hey hey
me and my buddy just finished a new track, last one we'll be makin together for a while because we're both starting school tomorow :S
anyways, here is the track, again aimed at an oldschool style, and hopefully we succeeded :)
Track Info:
Genre: Trance
Length: 5:18
Quality: 128 Kbps
Direct Download Link:
http://sunquest-samples.artists.mpf...sy_(Sample).mp3
Feedback always helpful :)
thanx for listening,
Enjoy |
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| davidemonin |
Another tune with cool melodic ideas. Liking the backround sounds/noises, cool pads, and overall atmosphere.
The main thing i would say are those leads, would try to "warm" those up a little: just has a little bit of that soft synth digital sound to it which could be maybe be attenuated just a bit, imo at least.
Keep up the good work man. |
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| Neeldan |
Hello Sunquest :D
I've heard your track and this my opinion:
Nice bassline but at some moments it's soft I guess, second I like very much this build up when main sounds are entering with (string ?) in the background.
Overall I must say that again you created great track !!!!
Good job Sun ;) . I can learn from you :D
Greetings |
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| Sunquest |
tnx guys :D
we'll try make the synth less computery hehe |
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| carl-b.mine.nu |
Great as usual!
tho that synth in the beginnin is quite rough on the ears.. too sharp imo... |
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| Mike_Foyle |
ahhhh too many sounds. be careful of the clashes in the build up, they really are ugly some of them. kick is nice, bass is cool but very muddy. that computery saw needs to go imo, i dont like the melody it plays and it clashes with other sounds. break now, the reverby effect on the left speaker.. why is it on the left speaker? lol it needs to be in the middle :P snare roll is awsome. that synthy string is very flat, try some more reverb or layer it a bit. melody is nice but i think production needs alot of work. its also compressed to hell again lol. ooh i really dont like that computery synth when it comes in, it does nothing for the track imo. sorry if im coming across harsh, but ive heard better from you, i think you need to get out of the habbit of just filling your tracks up with sounds that you dont need, because they just clash and sound ugly. like i said the melody and ideas in this are gorgeous, i say keep the kick, bass, percs, snare roll, but start the synth work again and give that melody the atmosphere it deserves :D
Things i like:
Strings when they play with the rest of the track
Kick
Bass
Percs
Snares
Melody (very good as always)
structure (almost spot on)
Things i dont like:
The sounds used for the leads and pads, way too muddy for me and too simple, me thinks they are presets ;) u can do better i know u too well! :)
Keep it up man just sort them sounds out! |
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| Jay M |
Leads are way too thin and they're a bit sharp. Needs some EQ here and there. Reverb creates a lot of mud as well. Bass is a bit weak. :(
Melody is pretty good, but the quality doesn't do it for me at all. Sorry, it's all so standard.. :rolleyes: |
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| Massive84 |
at 0.11 that synth and lead sounds really noobish sorry.
find the bass also a bit chaotic patterns, can't find the funk or Rythem whatever you wanne call it.
i like that break with that lead, and the bass finally gets better here.
ya gets chaotic after the snare roll, melody is nice but not very special like all your other melodies.
guess work on it :) |
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