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MY First Song ever ...
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| Dj Dovla |
I am very happy , i created my first song ever .
I don't know how it sounds , so its up to you to decide .
I think its kinda loopy , but i will work on it some more and mix it .
so don't hesitate to critisize it . |
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| Dj Dovla |
| sorry forgot the downlaod linkdownlaod |
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| DJ Pete |
| quote: | Originally posted by Dj Dovla
I am very happy , i created my first song ever .
I don't know how it sounds , so its up to you to decide .
I think its kinda loopy , but i will work on it some more and mix it .
so don't hesitate to critisize it . |
YO buddy:p you links not working, tryed saving as and everything.
I would like to hear your song:D |
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| Dj Dovla |
| i know damn , i have to upload it somwhere first . but i don't know where . Have any idea |
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| dj dave b |
The links not working because it points to
'http://c:/WINDOWS/Desktop/Junk/DjDovla-123.mp3'
:D
I'll check the tune out.. |
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| Dj Dovla |
here it is , should work now
www.myplay.com
email:[email protected]
pass:music
the song name is Dj Dovla - 123
so let me know what you think . I know it needs more work but ita a first .
plz sign out too ........... peace |
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| dj dave b |
sounds great!
get some nice main vocals in there and your set
one suggestion would be to maybe half way through the song create some sort of a break :) |
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| heydj70 |
| quote: | | One suggestion would be to maybe half way through the song create some sort of a break. |
I would have to agree. Other than that nice track. |
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| DJ Pete |
| well Its not Trance, more like house but its ok. You need to try and change and chop it up a bit to keep the listener interested:) |
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| Dj Dovla |
i know thats what i said , its not bad but to boring to listen to the same beat over and over again . I am into trance too . and the track is house . but i will work on it some more this week I think . Get some better vocals there and some kind of a break or solo i don't know . I ll see . Thanx for responding .
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :toothless |
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