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The Green Link - Dying Stars (original mix) 128 kbs
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| The Green Link |
Hi there!
This is my first post on this forum. I hope i'll learn from this.
I'm starting this with a new song. And of course I like some feedback/comments. Of course you, from now on you will find me in other threads as well.
The Green Link - Dying Stars (original mix)
Length: 7.35
Style: trance
Bitrate: 128 kb/s
Entirely made with Reason 2.5
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| Sunquest |
sounds are pretty good i gotta say...
i like the kick and bass a lot
melody is also pretty kewl :D
very much like an anthem hehe
sounds kinda like rank 1, no suggestions from me :)
keep on producing m8
peace out |
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| Lew.D |
sounds like a slight bit of adagio for strings inspirtaion here.
percussion is cool at the start but lovin when that panning gated synth comes in. Opening syncopated melody is a little thin for my like... may i suggest the use of some fx throughout the intro.
nice and original melodic progression, it changes just as i was expecting something really predictable so great work.
Maybe some further percussion variation would benefit the tune as well.
kinda goes into the breakdown suddenly but i like the immediate entry of the strings re-iterating that original melody.
When percussion kicks in with melody again i feel it's a bit sudden... which can sound good...no incredibly dancefloor friendly. i'd add a quick sweep or maybe quick snare/kick roll
6:00 and i';m gettin a little tired with the melody and the same old percussion.
overall i think there just needs to be a bit more variation and perhaps some more perc work. otherwise i think you've got some great ideas here, eg. the panning gated basey synth and that great main melody which could turn into a masterpiece with a bitta extra work
nice work mate :) |
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| pho mo |
hi m8, i like the idea behind this one, nice long and interesting chord progression there.
the distorted rhythmic synth that enters at 00:28 is great, really adds to the drive of the tune, and compliments the kick/bass perfectly. the bassline is really good too.
overall the tune was pretty interesting, but i got a little tired by the stabby melody line by the end of it, perhaps try varying the release times on that synth, or changing / layering patches.
all the best! :) |
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| The Green Link |
| Thank you guys! All your suggestions will be taken into consideration. I'm thinking about making a new mix, but thanks for the feedback until now. |
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