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Vivid Boy
i just wrote this 5 mins ago its not finished but whatever i think its pretty hype..and im willing to share :)





we can only sleep and wake/
fight for our goals to change our fate/
grab at what we make, rest on breaks, n' do it again for our childrens sake/
but maybe we could stop and take/
a second before its too late/
before we're controled, overthrown and owned by United States/
but by then its just to late/
we're hungry cause we never ate/
we sat down, around the table, n' only got remains off someones elses plate/
but today/ is the date/
we learn from our mistakes/
use our hate to unsedate our anger and barge through their in gates/
christsake/we can no longer tolerate/
this world is just to fake/
they paint a pretty picture while our pockets get raped in front our face/
but we can wash it all away/
even though the world might be be lightly stained/
we can still consolodate with reason and free the thoughts that they manipulate/
but i know/
we must try continue to grow/
even if it means living in a shadow and living in all time greatest low/
cause their will never be another chance/
and this is something u must begin to understand/
so at last/
we must finally take a stance/
throw away all our technology and live life in the past/
tho i know/ u cant/
distraction was their plan/
make the lazy extra lazy while we rule them and their land/
we can take the focus right away/
from the brilliant and brains/
if we work them to the bones and give em time to only play/
expand ur minds/ before u die
cause they dont want to see u climb/
but u can be sure im doing something about this, one day at a time/




thats all i got ill update it when im finished
Vivid Boy
yeahh im bompin whatcha gonna do?
mndeg
Now Playing: Super8 - Cre8 - [02:22m of 06:24m/192Kbps/44KHz/8.79 Mb]
aoooga! aooga!
<[FxP]TranceNutta> lol
<[FxP]TranceNutta> stop playing rips
<[FxP]TranceNutta> the full shud be released very very shortly
<[FxP]TranceNutta> =]
the 9x00 series was better than the geforce 5 series
<[FxP]TranceNutta> my gforce 5
of what
<[FxP]TranceNutta> runs better than a 98 pro
<[FxP]TranceNutta> on my mates computer
cre8?
<[FxP]TranceNutta> but maybe thats cos i have 2 gig mem
<[FxP]TranceNutta> and a 3,2+ processor
the aooga! wont be in vinyl?
<[FxP]TranceNutta> lol mndeg
<[FxP]TranceNutta> i received the vinyl this morning
turn off the light
take a deep breath
and
relax
is it in it?
a 5200 runs better than a 9800 pro? lol
<[FxP]TranceNutta> it shud be ripped soon
weird
does it have aooga!
<[FxP]TranceNutta> off
<[FxP]TranceNutta> u crank
does it have aooga
<[FxP]TranceNutta> do u have a in ass to kick
wtf is aooga
super8 -cre8
<[FxP]TranceNutta> knows
obviously
<[FxP]TranceNutta> its what his dad screams when he sticks it in him
do you have multiple personality disorder
<[FxP]TranceNutta> mndeg
<[FxP]TranceNutta> can u wave to the hub?
lol
no
<[FxP]TranceNutta> tough
<[FxP]TranceNutta> say bye
hi
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mndeg
is that guy either retarded, crazy, or does aooga mean something in some weird european language?
Vivid Boy
there finished it
smokeape
Finished?

I'll drink to that!

Lol!


[[[smoke]]]

Mysterio - Fading Like a Flower
Vivid Boy
quote:
Originally posted by smokeape
Finished?

I'll drink to that!

Lol!


[[[smoke]]]

Mysterio - Fading Like a Flower


yeah i got in bored of it... sue me
trancepixie17
Ode to Snow


Covered in a blanket of white
Angelic fluff
Bring upon
My sniffles
And tissue box
Curled up cozy
Ice cracks
I stand
Flying free
Into a
Patch
Of a white
Blanket
Molded
White blobs
Beauty stricken
Frozen
Finger tips
White pearls
Flash
An instance
Jolted hard
Smacked my cheek
Burning red
Involuntarily frozen
White crest
Caressing my
face

I just finished this piece (my first rough draft) about a week ago. I completed my final draft, I am publishing it my school magazine.
nchs09
quote:
Originally posted by trancepixie17
Ode to Snow


Covered in a blanket of white
Angelic fluff
Bring upon
My sniffles
And tissue box
Curled up cozy
Ice cracks
I stand
Flying free
Into a
Patch
Of a white
Blanket
Molded
White blobs
Beauty stricken
Frozen
Finger tips
White pearls
Flash
An instance
Jolted hard
Smacked my cheek
Burning red
Involuntarily frozen
White crest
Caressing my
face

I just finished this piece (my first rough draft) about a week ago. I completed my final draft, I am publishing it my school magazine.
so trancepixie still posts.. :wtf: hehe
smokeape
quote:
Originally posted by Vivid Boy
yeah i got in bored of it... sue me


Can't mess with fellow member of Superheroes Alliance.
I'll sue those Ninjars to their knees instead!

:p
[[[smoke]]]

spacechica
Years upon years
we waited for this moment
yearning and desire can not satiate
nor alleviate
the deepest sorrow mired within
A wish
a single hope
answered
bright and enduring
complete and forever existing
I am forever grateful
Jealousy and extreme wickedness can not prevail
Like a tempestuous fit
enshrouded with myopia
slowly sealing the fate of those
lost in delusion
There is no place for fear here
for I have travelled far and wide
I have seen unsurpassable beauty
and I have witnessed unspeakable vileness
manifest within the human heart
A single wish extended
that we may find the duty in ourselves
to stand up for justice
as we lend our voices in support of those who seem to have none
and uphold the pillars upon which humanity will remember
History unfolds
and in this chapter
I choose life.
Slylee
you suck
here’s a buck
now go pay someone to give a
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