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[Trance]Mane - Sirius[128]
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| Mane |
Hello
Ive made this track 30 min ago,I was making it for 5 h I started at 20 and done it at 1 :) I was inspired by music one of the up/coming producer :D and the title comes from producer of peanuts which i was eating during making track lol hope you will like my track and as always all feedbacks are welcome :)
Mane - Sirius
http://www.audiostreet.net/artists/005/066/mane.html
gretings
Lukas |
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| Thunder5 |
Writing as listening..
Track builds up nice. Somehow reminds me of some PvD's work. :D
The break sounds sweet..
Overall pretty cool track..
Keep on it. :D
-Matti- |
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| DjCommisad |
good stuff. quite enjoyable.
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| Sunquest |
i see u like ambient sounds :D nature stuff , i love that too, very soothing
so about ur track, kick beats bass all excellent, nothing to say there, now comes the pvd style as dj thunder said before ;)
melody is a little light, i think u can add maybe another layer or something? but overall great mastering, and really soothing track :D
very nice style u got urself , keep it up
peace out |
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| optik |
did this over at mpfspromotions.com
see review there |
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| Mane |
| thx guys for feedbacks really apreciate :) |
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| The Green Link |
| Melody needs to be improved - as said before by adding some layers or so. It is not a quite strong melody. What is there that will remind the listener of this song? I would redo the melody just 2 make the song more unique. |
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| Jay M |
Ok i hear the eq-ing worked out better. It all sounds nice together. Maybe lower the volume of the hats jsut a bit.
It's quite a drag till something happens, it's far too static. Extra melody isn't a making me warm..
Lovely pads in the break. Piano does a nice job, it's subtle. Break is taking too long as well now. Here's that melody again, nah needs improvement imo. Work on the climax as well.
Sounds are quite good, but I'm turning it off now, work on the dynamics!
Good luck!
-Jay |
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| pho mo |
The reverb kick at 3:49, if the tail on that thing lasted for 20 seconds I reckon you've got yourself a winner :) (Just a little rant for ya )
Overall I really liked listening to your tune m8, it is a very nice chilled track, and a lot of things sounds great. There's considerable depth to the tune, pretty good for 5 hours work! As the others said, a bit more dynamics would carry this track a whole lot further. |
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