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Andrew Dring - Death Is Only The Beginning
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| gouryella2k4 |
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/andrewdringmusic.htm
This is a light hard trance track 145 BPM, uplifting riff, posted sample earlier in the year finally got this finished after 3 months of waiting. Feedback was good to start with so hopefully the end product doesnt dissapoint, hope you enjoy it. Let me know what you think.
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| gouryella2k4 |
| can anyone please give feedback anything with constructive cirtiscim will do |
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| optik |
I'll give it a go if you do mine.
ok, nice thick intro - would take the reverb off the bassdrum to get it to kick harder - and the first 37 seconds repeat 2 bars -= might want to add a little variation, is it gets kinda boring.
gets better at 1:07, when it starts to build
could do with some steroe work - maybe add another layer of perks to bring out the field
like the smampled fx at 2:02
but you overuse it after that - maybe only use it one-two times
pretty good melody, but again, it doesn't really build, just repeats.
breakdown is too long in my opinion without a build =)- at 3:35, not that much has happened
all sounds a bit muddy when it comes back in - you need to work on eqing the individual sounds (and maybe panning them)
some nice stuff in there, you just need to work on the production some more
cheers, link to mine is in my sig
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| gouryella2k4 |
cheers man thanks for listenin ill be sure to check urs out soon as i can a lot of the production was done in headphones unfortunately so mastering wasnt too great
if anyone else can give me any ideas or feedback would be much appreciated |
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