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Terry Bones vs Fran VD: Fallen Angel (Fran VD Remix)
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| Fran |
Hi everybody, here is a remix mine of a tune i maked with Terry Bones.
Not masterised yet.
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| Digital Aura |
HI.
EQ some of the highs out. They're just a tad too rich. That lead synth tends to get to be a little monotonous after several minutes. Its only playing 3 notes, so maybe it needs some variation, or FX like phasing or sweeping.
This is one long song. At 3:30 the piano is great. Nice reverb and delay on it...but that 3 note lead coming back in just kills it for me. At least you changed synths.
After 7:00 the 3 note lead mixes with another melody ... but the counter melody doesn't really seem to match. Did you intend for this dissonance?
Good mixdown...just fix the highs at the beginning.
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| Sunquest |
a little too much high treble just like Digital said...
kick could be stronger, theres a little 2 many melodies i think, theres one that comes near the end which i think u just dont need, track is a little repetitive, i like the bass, very original, and the percs,
so just a little fixin up to do,
ttyl m8 |
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| Fran |
Thanks for your comments ;)
i' ll work on it |
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