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CoNfuSion - A Trip To Wonderland
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| ConFuSion |
Hello folks! im now releasing my new track "A trip to wonderland", and it would have been fine to get some feedbacks! :)
i've tried something new this time, and done some Piano playing in my songs, maybe a little bit influenced by Mute - Didicato, and robert miles
You can download the song
Here:
192 kb/s
Mp3 format
Streaming/downloading
Confusion - A Trip to wonderland
Software/Hardware used:
Hardware:
Korg Triton
Roland Mc-307
Pioneer Efx-500
Software used:
Reason 2.5
Cubase SX 2.0
Vanguard synth
Wavelab |
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| cybernetica |
Sounds very good to me, everything fits with each other. Production-wise nothing to complain about except maybe in some parts (2:30 e.g.) you need only a little bit more "clarity". I'd turn up the higher frequencies but I'm not much of an expert with that style so others should decide ;)
Oh, and the Piano is just awesome, external recording or synthie? :)
I give you 9/10 Points, keep up the good work!
if you found this helpful you could be so kind and drop my track a small comment:
http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...threadid=215755 |
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| ConFuSion |
Thanks for the great reply :)
maybe i've should done something about that 2:30 part.. I will maybe take a look at it ;)
and by the way, All the piano stuff is made by me on the Korg Triton :happy2:
I will take a look at your song too :) |
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| alanzo |
hihats are really nice... could use some more layers throughout.. atmospheric type stuff.. plus the entire track needs some compression/limiting to maxamize the levels..
like the synth at 1:45.. what did you use?
it gets a little boring at 2:30 because the melody isn't really going anywhere...
the piano composition at 3:30 is real nice..
2 biggest problems - needs more layers (a more complex texture)
the general level of the track needs to be louder (limiting and compression applied to the entire mix will do that) |
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| Sunquest |
melody in the middle sounds very ASOT ish hehe
actually after listen to this , it sounds similiar to one of george hales tracks...
hmmm ;)
but other than that, ur mixing and melodies are great, u just really need to work on mastering, such as more stereo a little, maybe a little more reverbs, raising volume on some sounds....
keep workin at it m8
peace out |
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| Luke Terry |
the melody is actually the same as a track myself, george kendall + chris priscott did 18 months ago under our prismatic guise back in the day
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| Jay M |
I especially like the percussion and the pads and fx in this one.
The mastering is the weakest part.
Wait..
I hear a double kick (like in bad beatmixing)...:sadgreen: I think there are percussion layers put on each other.. which makes me questioning the whole integrety of this track (or so).
Oh well, Dustbin it goes. |
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| ConFuSion |
| quote: | Originally posted by alanzo
hihats are really nice... could use some more layers throughout.. atmospheric type stuff.. plus the entire track needs some compression/limiting to maxamize the levels..
like the synth at 1:45.. what did you use?
it gets a little boring at 2:30 because the melody isn't really going anywhere...
the piano composition at 3:30 is real nice..
2 biggest problems - needs more layers (a more complex texture)
the general level of the track needs to be louder (limiting and compression applied to the entire mix will do that) |
thanks :)
maybe a little compression and limiting will do the thing :)
at 1:45.. im not sure if that was a patch from reason, or vanguard.. but i think it was a downloaded patch to reason Subtractor, that i've layd a lot of efx on :)
thanks for my piano composition :) |
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| ConFuSion |
| quote: | Originally posted by Sunquest
melody in the middle sounds very ASOT ish hehe
actually after listen to this , it sounds similiar to one of george hales tracks...
hmmm ;)
but other than that, ur mixing and melodies are great, u just really need to work on mastering, such as more stereo a little, maybe a little more reverbs, raising volume on some sounds....
keep workin at it m8
peace out |
hehe you know what.. i've realised that yesterday.. i had NO idea, that my melody was from another song =/
it isn't totaly the same, but have some semlilar tones...
that irreated me alot :P
the melody just popped up in my head, and that was the resault.. i thaught it was my own.. till yesterday......
maybe a little mastering as mentioned before will do the thing :)
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| ConFuSion |
| quote: | Originally posted by Jay M
I especially like the percussion and the pads and fx in this one.
The mastering is the weakest part.
Wait..
I hear a double kick (like in bad beatmixing)...:sadgreen: I think there are percussion layers put on each other.. which makes me questioning the whole integrety of this track (or so).
Oh well, Dustbin it goes. |
it's something about the layers of the percussion in it... something is crashing.. i haven't found out yet what it is.. but i will :) |
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| serp |
well musically it's a nice tune
but the mixdown and stuff lets it down, everything needs fixing up! |
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