| pho mo |
Sounds really promising, the melodies are real nice.
For the structure of the tune, instead of making sudden changes try bringing in the elements a bit slower, e.g. filtering them in and layering them, instead of just swapping over to a new bit.
For example the bit before 1:22, try adding a few more repetitions of that motif, adding a few more layers as you go, before transiting into the next bit. Add fx's and so it's not boring while being repetitive.
I love the funky groove you've got going here. Looking forward to hearing what you do with this :) |
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